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Oh my bloody hell! I wonder how Fenrir is going to react to that little statement... though it's not Harry's fault, he probably was never taught how to identify when he's found his mate, cause the connection sure is there!

Please update chapter 12 soon ^_^

Jan

I really love your story, but I'm kind of confused.. where did the spanish come from? I dont remember it being mentioned anywhere that they were spanish lol

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post soon!
you can't leave it like that!!!!!!

Great story. Please email me with updates. drattie@comcast.net

Awe... Well, how's Harry supposed to know how to tell if Fenrir was his mate or not? He doesn't know... GREAT chapter! The last one was great as well I just didn't get to review for it! Soooo I'm telling you now! Great story so far! Hope for more soon!!!
~rah~

This story is getting really good. Please update soon.

WOw - I love the way Fenrir is so unsure of himself here. Its almost painful to read - his hesitation and borderline fear seems so real. not quite sure why Harry doesn't know he's met his mate. I;m presuming its because he is so insecure in who he is, and has been taught nothing about what to expect. The fuzzy feelings and arousal hes getting when seeing Fenrir are obviously his instincts coming into play - I hope he comes to rely on these a bit more, and can - eventually - accept his mate as such.

Another great chapter and here is my email for updates poohnation74@yahoo.com, thank you!

I really enjoyed this last chapter a lot and I absolutely can't wait for the next update to come along! I'm glad that they now know Harry is Fenrir's mate but I can't wait to see how the rest of the scene plays out. Thank you for writing such a wonderful story for all of us to enjoy :D

-Alexiad

poor guys one more barrier to overcome. And yeah update notices are awesome, esp with links in them! This one seemed longer or maybe just better spaced or something. I love this story so much.