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I read this story over and over, whilst waiting for you to update! I absolutely love it! I enjoy it more each time I read it! I know you don't want to be nagged about updating, but I very much appreciate the effort you made getting this chapter out so quickly. I look forward to the next chapter! Hope you have time for it soon!

Fenrir is soooo whipped by Harry. And they have barely even spoken to each other! LOL

another cliffy end!! omfg... well, i do love this chapter, in fact every one of them, the whole fic!! and i just can

ch. 11. Oh boy....talk about lost in translation.

Hey this is my first time reviewing this story,
BUT I have read it since the first chap.
Oh gods I thought last chapter was a major cliff hanger and then you throw this at me 0o
Nice touch with the language barrier I cant say I was expecting that
So please drink a coffee, eat some chocolate and update soon!

oh i forget too ask if you could send me an email when you update at is13car@hotmail.com
thanks

Thanks so much for the long, quick update! Fenrir seems much gentler than I'd expect--would have though Harry would be the softie! But what good brothers, to barge into the Alpha's room in search of their brother!

I second Karen's idea of a, er, revealing meeting with James, btw! : )

Poor Harry doesn't realize that his mate is Fenrir. How does Fenrir go about proving this to him. Please update again soon.

Hiya!
Awesome! I am review number 500!! Congrats! :D Thank you very much for such a wonderful chapter and for answering my question before! I did have another though. How was Fenrir able to tell that it was Harry he was looking at in the dining hall? Because they both have only ever seen each other in their wolf forms, hence why Harry doesn't know the alpha is his mate, or the friendly black wolf, right? So I was wondering about that. Also, I know Harry has trouble speaking, but how come in previous chapters he's completely fine with understanding English from his brothers (I say so because this is really the only chapter that Spanish has been used, so I assume the brothers were speaking to harry in english before now) but now suddenly he has trouble understanding it from Fenrir and now his brothers speak in Spanish? It's cool, don't get me wrong, I just needed some gaps filled in, you know? Anyway, you are doing an amazing job!! I love the interactions between Fenrir and Harry, but I feel sorry for poor Fenrir, he's so worried about doing the wrong thing...awww! Please keep up the great work!! :D

PS. Email me please when the next chapter is finished :) CoffeeBoy85@aol.com

You just don't let up on the nasty cliffies, do you :(? I'm happy for a slightly longer chapter and that you updated as you said earlier, but it still makes it a bit hard to enjoy reading when you start reading a chapter, get excited, the excitement keeps growing, and then stills against a solid wall. And the process is always repeated in every chapter.