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December 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I hope Caspian doesn't get hurt, even though he said some really hurtful things about Fenrir... I hope Fenrir can prove his affection for Harry :)
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December 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
as usual love it :P update soon!!
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December 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
CHAPTER 12
Hi, Kati-chan,
Your fic is one of my favorite in HP right now. I absolutely love it. Chapter eight was quite special and this bit:
The most amazing wolf: shy, graceful, agile, sweet, uncertain, innocent, beautiful beyond belief or imagination. He was delicate-pawed, green-gazed, fine-boned. He had a velvet coat of the darkest night, and a caramel smooth voice that rose and fell in melodious whimpers and whines, yips and yelps.
just made me literally "see" Harry as a wolf. That was so well done, amazing!
I am one of many readers who didn't realize that Harry was Spanish. It's not a bad thing, though, because I adore AUs and this only added an extra layer to the already wonderful plot. I suppose, all readers have their personal reading patternes where small parts of anything they read get skimmed over. I mean, I skim Shakespeare, honestly :) So, little clues may and will be missed. Not a big deal at all.
The fic as a whole is very good and I enjoy every minute of reading.
P.S. The review by pippin92 id # 3001247686 had stretched the review board sideways big time.
No idea why people can't hit the line break.
Could it be removed or reposted without three feet of ...please,please,please,please,please,please,please,please,please,please,... ?
This is one case when I'd prefer three inches to three feet :D
Hi, Kati-chan,
Your fic is one of my favorite in HP right now. I absolutely love it. Chapter eight was quite special and this bit:
The most amazing wolf: shy, graceful, agile, sweet, uncertain, innocent, beautiful beyond belief or imagination. He was delicate-pawed, green-gazed, fine-boned. He had a velvet coat of the darkest night, and a caramel smooth voice that rose and fell in melodious whimpers and whines, yips and yelps.
just made me literally "see" Harry as a wolf. That was so well done, amazing!
I am one of many readers who didn't realize that Harry was Spanish. It's not a bad thing, though, because I adore AUs and this only added an extra layer to the already wonderful plot. I suppose, all readers have their personal reading patternes where small parts of anything they read get skimmed over. I mean, I skim Shakespeare, honestly :) So, little clues may and will be missed. Not a big deal at all.
The fic as a whole is very good and I enjoy every minute of reading.
P.S. The review by pippin92 id # 3001247686 had stretched the review board sideways big time.
No idea why people can't hit the line break.
Could it be removed or reposted without three feet of ...please,please,please,please,please,please,please,please,please,please,... ?
This is one case when I'd prefer three inches to three feet :D
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December 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Okay, that was cowardly of Caspian.
He just basically was like, "Take Harry as long as you don't hurt me!" I no longer like him as much.
Especially since Harry is still confused and Fenrir still has no clue that Harry isn't trying to be creul and Caspian didn't explain.
Harry would never do that!
OH! I see a solution, Harry should ask Fenrir why he hasn't hurt him, and if he wants to he can hurt him and not his brothers instead because it's his fault anyways.
I have checked here every single day you were gone, ignore the others please please please write! (My birthday is next week and it's the middle of exams if you could update before wednesday that would be a wonderful b-day gift!)
Keep it up, this is by far the story I look forward to the most! (And since it's now 6:00pm and I have a exam tommorrow morning at 8:30 thats saying alot!) Love you keep it up!
He just basically was like, "Take Harry as long as you don't hurt me!" I no longer like him as much.
Especially since Harry is still confused and Fenrir still has no clue that Harry isn't trying to be creul and Caspian didn't explain.
Harry would never do that!
OH! I see a solution, Harry should ask Fenrir why he hasn't hurt him, and if he wants to he can hurt him and not his brothers instead because it's his fault anyways.
I have checked here every single day you were gone, ignore the others please please please write! (My birthday is next week and it's the middle of exams if you could update before wednesday that would be a wonderful b-day gift!)
Keep it up, this is by far the story I look forward to the most! (And since it's now 6:00pm and I have a exam tommorrow morning at 8:30 thats saying alot!) Love you keep it up!
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December 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I want to read the talk between Harry and fenrir !!!
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December 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
whoa whoa whoa!!!!!!!!!! where did the spanish come from? i understand that harry has a stuttering problem, but i haven't seen any inkling in the story before that harry spoke a different language before this chapter. please update soon *kisses*
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December 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
hm.. weird that it didn't work...
Kitten_kiyo@yahoo.com should work... otherwise try Zerooowa@yahoo.com
Kitten_kiyo@yahoo.com should work... otherwise try Zerooowa@yahoo.com
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December 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I absolutely love it !! Can you had me on your update list please ? :)
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December 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I love this story so much! Harry is so sweet- I just want to give him a big hug in chapter 11. Brilliant writing, I love the story line :D. Could I please be added to the update list please? (seraphangel@hotmail.co.uk) I cant wait for the next chapter XD!
Sam
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Sam
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November 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I love this story! I don't usually go for Fenrir/Harry pairings and this was enough to change my mind!