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Another great chapter but you can't hurt Cass for wanting to save Harry.

Please doen't punish me for others bad behavior. I know I don't deserve any special reward because I don't review regularily but I am reading and very much enjoying. It did somewhat suprise me that Harry's english was so week because even though I READ, not skimmed, the story and read all the clues you listed, they weren't marked as super important so I was a little suprised but not shocked and upset. I did check for the update lots and was so glad to see it today. I like that Fenrir's instincts towards Harry seem to be good but he doesn't act on them, I am very much looking forward to more interaction between the two of them. Please, please keep writing the story and if you do happen to post especially long chapters or post a little early I will be truely appreaciative.

I just read Chapter 12. Crap, you haven't written recently because you were ticked at your last reviews? Screw them. If they wouldn't take the time to actually read the story and understand something as simple as Harry and his family are Spanish and primarily speak Spanish, screw them! Please don't take those reviews seriously. Don't feel dejected because others are ignorant. The rest of us freaking love what you're doing!

I don't typically offer reviews. I'm told I'm too blunt and lack tact. I found this pairing to be unusual. I like unusual. I have enjoyed the relationship that appears to be growing between Harry and Caspian, especially since Caspian seems to be growing a pair after years of guilt and remorse from always failing Harry. The language barrier and the physical and emotional abuse Harry suffered for 'killing' his mother has certainly added some serious barriers for Harry and Fenrir to overcome. It's gotten me wondering what kind of explosion we're in for once Harry's father finds out Harry's bonded and to whom. I can't wait.

Don't get discouraged. If it makes you feel any better, your story has few misspellings, incorrect grammar and transitional issues than most stories. It is obvious you're putting a lot of time and effort into your writing. It is appreciated!

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I know I'm a bad person, what with reading your story from the beginning without reviewing once. I

Ahhhh! Noooo Harry! Wake up!
Hehe, I feel better now. =D
I think it's stupid how some people freaked out because Harry's Spanish.
It made complete sense to me.
Ah well, just ignore them. ;)
Your story's great, so please don't stop! =P
Hopefully, Harry will clue in soon.

I don't have a problem with Harry being Spanish...don't think I said anything like that either. It makes perfect sense to have Harry speak another language, both as a plot device and in general. I mean if someone has to travel for AGES to get to a place then it's very likely that when they get there they are going to speak another language (At least it's true here in Europe). As for the plot device, Harry talking a different language to his mate will mean the relationship will progress slower and that you aren't going to throw Harry's brother's completely out of view since now they will be needed to translate for Harry. At least, that's my prediction not a given.

As for skim reading, I admit to doing that a lot but as I said in my only review of this story so far, I've read this story several times so I don't think I've missed much.

This chapter now then...I like the view from Fenrir, it was detailed again. Though I will confess to being slightly disappointed that time wise the chapter seemed to cover about 5-10 minutes of life for Harry, Fenrir etc. I hope in the next chapter we see a little more time pass. Also, Harry did feel a slight tingle in his stomach during the full moon which he put down to having eaten something funny, was this the recognision of his mate that he was completely oblivious to?

I hope you update soon, and that I haven't bored you with my overly long review. See you when I see you. Jules.

omfg!!!! so been waiting for thatttttttttt!!!!!!!


wow, i love it, its so different from alot of the other stories, very orginial. i love your mind! XDXDXD


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Nooo! How could you end it there?!? I'm loving this story so far, but I definitely can't wait for the next update! What a place to stop... *sigh* In any case, don't let the obnoxious reviews get to you, this is an absolutely wonderful piece of fiction that is currently forcing me away from my studying for finals (at gunpoint, I swear). While I didn't recall that he was Spanish, I'm one of those people that forgets that kind of thing and my first reaction when something doesn't make sense is to go back and re-read. (that, or just shrug and accept it). But yes it was obvious once I thought about it a bit. Anyways, I love this story to bits so please continue with the wonderful updates soon so that I find out what happens. (no pressure)

aw i'm so sorry about all the negative reviews. i'm glad you're still continuing on with the story. i check almost everyday to see if you've updated and i about screamed when you did. =)

I love it! And I hope my review is going to make you update sooner!!! lol