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More I Love This story, and as for your rant i belive you did explain they were spanish in the first couple chapters

-D ( forgive the spelling never was my strong point )

oh my! more please!!!

I hope I didn't contribute to that Spanish/English thing you are going through.

Great chapter, I just with they were quicker on the uptake of who is who and what the hell is going on. :-) Of course the faster to Fenrir and Harry getting together and Harry understanding his worth in this world the better. I would also like to read of his brothers yet again being ashamed of their treatment of him and apologizing for it.

And of course, Fenrir has to get a clue about Harry and that he has no idea what sex is and much less what a mate is.

Screw anyone (including me, if I did) pissing you off! This is a great story, you are doing a great job at it so keep it up, if only for you and your talent. Don't ever stop what you are good at because someone pisses you off, work even harder because of it!! I hate to tell you this, but in real life it is going to happen all of the time. Fight that too!!! You are very talented, don't ever let anyone convince you differently!!!!!!!!

Thanks for sharing your story with us! If we had the talent to write it, we wouldn't be reading yours. We don't, you do, take pride in that.

can't wait to read the next chapter!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

well.. i do understand the whole spanish-english stuff, specially since i speak spanish and i

Because I am deeply enjoying this story, I am resisting the urge to fucking. SCREAM.

Yes, Caspian, Harry would know for certain that he doesn't have a mate because, you know, your father and school systems both spent SO much time and effort educating Harry on all aspects of werewolf life like recognizing a mate. OH WAIT. James: "YOU SUCK! *PUNCH*" Schools: "Your only career choice is being a hooker, so just practice looking pretty in front of a mirror and stop breathing my air."

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If you would be so kind as to update with haste, it would be greatly appreciated. Thank you.

I think your subtle hints were great. I love your story, and anyone who doesn't shouldn't read it. Great job. Keep the chapters coming.

update soon please!!!!!!!!

That was awesome!

I thought it actually quite cool that Harry was from a different country. Goes toward the point of the Alpha ruling over all, as well as Harry being so nervous and unsure in the new, foreign country. So well done not listening to readers who'd argue with an author's storyline.

That said, Caspian is very passionate, isn't he? Dashing into the Alpha's private chambers to rescue his brother one minute, pushing said brother away and making a run for it the next...Wonder what Fenrir thinks of this family! : ) Hopefully the Alpha will wise up quickly and get a translator in to work out what's been going through Harry's mind...

Can't wait for the next chapter!