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December 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
The ending was amusing. It still nags at me why Harry doesn't know when he's met his mate. I really hope that James pays..
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December 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I love this story! I can't wait to read the next chapter so please update soon!
Athena
Athena
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December 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I love ur story and I totally understand i quit writing because this ass completely bashed my story, and i love ur concept and if these people are so unwilling to take the time to read the story and not just skim over it then to bad for them. keep writing ur inspiring me to come back.
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December 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OMG!!! This is suck an awesome story, it keeps me on edge the entire time! I love innocent, sub Harry! BTW, I totally knew that the Potters were from Spain. There were tons of clues to tell you that the Potters were Spanish, some people are just dense, dont let them get you down, you are a awesome writer! Keep your lovely chapters coming!
-Liz
-Liz
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December 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
now that you mention it...shit, i completely forgot harry was spanish.
Anyway, even if it hadn't been mentioned before, it's your fic, your world, your rules.
Each writer is the dictator in their own little world...or at least it should be that way.
Liked the chapter, by the way, though i'm dying to see what will happen once they manage to understand each other.
:D
p.s: Thank you for sending me the email! i usually forget to check the stories from adultfanfiction, as there's no alert of new chapter...
Anyway, even if it hadn't been mentioned before, it's your fic, your world, your rules.
Each writer is the dictator in their own little world...or at least it should be that way.
Liked the chapter, by the way, though i'm dying to see what will happen once they manage to understand each other.
:D
p.s: Thank you for sending me the email! i usually forget to check the stories from adultfanfiction, as there's no alert of new chapter...
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December 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh! Great chapter! I can't wait to see some Fenrir/Harry interaction!!! I really like the added touch of Harry not speaking English-- I thought I was an interesting barrier to put between them. Nice job!
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December 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Poor Caspian, he was only trying to help Harry. I hope everything works out soon.
twilight
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twilight
twilight_mouri@yahoo.com
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December 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Please let Harry explain his feelings to his brother about how he feels and is not sure that he is the Aplha's mate and maybe have his brother explain this to the Alpha
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December 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Awww, don't let the negative reviews get to you! Look at all the great feedback and excitement in the comments for this fic -- take heart! :)
I'm relieved Harry feels attracted to Fenrir -- with the last chapter, I wasn't sure if he just didn't feel chemistry with Fenrir when they're in human form. So that's good!
Really looking forward to Harry and Fenrir getting to know each other, for Fenrir to have chances to be more gentle, and (maybe?) for Harry to turn out to be a sex kitten. :D
I'm relieved Harry feels attracted to Fenrir -- with the last chapter, I wasn't sure if he just didn't feel chemistry with Fenrir when they're in human form. So that's good!
Really looking forward to Harry and Fenrir getting to know each other, for Fenrir to have chances to be more gentle, and (maybe?) for Harry to turn out to be a sex kitten. :D
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December 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow this is getting a bit confusing for me. I sure do hope everything will work out for them