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Hey, I really like it. Can you add me to your update list : thanatos-eros@hotmail.fr ?
Thank you.
JJ

Perfect. I love AUs if they are well written, and yours certainly is. Original. Great theme, motives. I also like the way you dont tell the reader everything outright (like you explained in the case of Harry being Spanish in your story - hehe, I actually read author notes!) I can say I like it more chapter after chapter. But the best thing is: during the first few chapters Harry seemed rather well composed (for example voluntarily touching others and seeking physical contact) for someone abused and beaten as intensely as I imagined, but last two chapters were absolutely perrrrfect. A whole lot more natural. So ... cute! :-D Well done, thank you. I will look forward to next chapters.

S.

Oh, I love the communication challenges that Fenrir and Harry will have to face! It's original and interesting :-)

I am crawling out of hiding to review this. I personally know how devastating bad reviews can be, so I wanted to encourage you some. I love this story, and I check AFFN every day hoping that it has been udpated. When it hadn't been updated in a while, I was sad. I had forgotten that Harry was not a native english speaker, but when he started speaking spanish I was reminded and it wasn't strange at all. I love Fenrir in this, and I can't wait till they get over this misunderstanding and start the real stuff! I do so love abused!/shy!Harry, and the stuttering is a nice touch. I even watched some videos on stuttering on youtube so I could fully imagine Harry's speech patterns.

I am also enjoying the fact that you are showing Fenrir's POV on this. It is refreshing to see that Fenrir is actually really self-conscious of his hugeness and super-hot-manliness. lmao. I am interested in seeing how he deals with super submissive Harry, everyone's reactions to Harry, and how he deals with them, and also the whole dealing with James Potter and his abuse stuff! So don't let bad reviews get you down, and update, update update!

OMG!!!! i feel so sorry for Fenrir! his mate doesn't recognize him *pout* but he really should release Harry's brothers because imprisoning them is soooo not going to get him on harry's good side :P thanks soooo much for not giving up on this story ^.^

First of all, I feel quite smug, cause I remembered Harry was Spanish! *Is self-satisfied* But anyway. I love Caspian and Harry. They're just so lovely. And I really like Fenrir. I mean, the way he stays in character. Like, just because he's met Harry, he doesn't act wildly out of character; he's still harsh and scary with everyone, except Harry. And who could blame him. I mean, how lovely is Harry in this story?

And I hope James gets his. I bet Fenrir is going to be PISSED when he finds out what James did to Harry.

And at this point, I'm going to get a bit personal, so bear with me.

I suffer from severe anxiety and depression. I mean, I can barely leave the house it's so bad. But this story just . . . really helps. I mean, sometimes when I feel an anxiety attack coming on, I go read this story, and it more often than not helps calm me down. So thanks for helping stop me doing something really bad, to myself or someone else.

And update soon! Please! It was SUCH a long wait last time. And I want to know what happens next, to Caspian and poor, terrified little Harry.

Sooooo, I loved that Harry was spanish!!! I love the language and most of my favorite movies are in spanish!!! I think it is a great twist to the story! Don't listen to anyone else, they are clueless :P jk, but still, i think its great. I am always waiting for an update from you!! I can't wait for the next one, i always makes my day :D

geo

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Good chapter.

AHHHH! no, i don't want anything to happen to Caspian... Fenrir knows why he acted right? no torture... right? and does Harry even know what the hell he is supposed to feel when he finds his mate? huh? yeah, i don't think so... it is a world of misunderstandings!!

ok okay well whoever is giving you bad reviews is an asswhole. I LOVE this story and I am smart enought to realize that harry is spanish -You'd have to be an idiot to not know by now. This is one of my favorite stories, I check for updates a few times a week, not because I think you will actually have another chapter so quickly but I just cant help but double check all the time. Youre story is great your plot is fantastic, Your characters are original and exciting and well thought out, I absolutely love how you always have me caught up in the anticipation of what will happen next. You're a fantastic author so dont become disheartened by complete morons, know there are a lot of people out there like me, who are waiting with baited breath for the next exciting chapter.