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wow I love the story!!! please please update soon!!!!!!

can you send me updates?

I, for one, love your updates. Writers can take artistic liberties with their stories so who cares if Harry is spanish or not. Can't wait to read more :D

You know, sometimes these misunderstandings are humorous, and sometimes they're frightening. This one is a bit of both I think. Fenrir thinks Harry is just being cruel, while Harry doesn't recognize the bond that he feels, because he doesn't think anything good could happen to him. It should be an interesting conversation that they have. I also can't help wondering how much pain James will soon find himself in, when Fenrir learns what he did.

Will you please e-mail me when you update? tiffak1986@yahoo.com Thanks!

pretty good

Oh wow.
that many people disagreed with harry being spanish? what the hell!
when you said he was Spanish, i was kinda "finally! i was wondering what he was!" cause of all the hints you were dropping.

Great chapter, by the way, though an evil cliffhanger >.<
ooohhh i hope harry understands soon :P

Greetings,

I just wanted to let you know that you have at least one person who does not skim your story. I enjoy the fact that you do not tell us everything in simple sentences like we are 2. Complexity and subtly always give a plot more depth and I appreciate that.

ps- I did get from the hints that Harry was Spanish, I thought it was an interesting plot twist.

It was very clear that the brothers had traveled a long way, and there had been noticable language barriers several times through out the story. It makes sense that Harry is Spanish. And I think that readers want to insist that he must be English because the original character is. They're just limiting themselves.

I'm so glad you continued. And I feel aggravated that apparently so many people were rude.

Poor Harry is so conflicted. Now that he actually has something good happening to him, he can't beleive that it might actually be true. And I worry what might happen to Caspian and the other brothers. They could be let off quickly, or it could turn out very very bad.

Please someone. Help!! I love it but please stop this confusing mess. What's going to happen to Harry's brothers? Have mercy Fenrir!!Update soon! ;P

Awesome, I love this story. Your update made my day. ^_^

I thought it added to the drama when you had Harry finally talk in Spanish. Anyway, I can't wait to read the next chapter. My email is minion_of_yaoi_and_darkness@yahoo.com.