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for What Are You Worth?

by kati

schedule January 29, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I said I'd start hounding you. But this review does have a purpose. I know it was a while ago, but I didn't comment then. The way you described the change from human to wolf was *incredible*. It was so . . . realistic. I mean it wasn't like most authors' write transformations: "He was a human, then he was an animal." You seemed to actually have thought about the physical logistics of a human skeleton becoming that of a wolf's. I especially liked the description of the fur coming out through the skin; I must say, that particular aspect had never really occured to me before. So, well done.

And now UPDATE!! I reviewed three times last chapter, and then you updated, so I'm hoping it works again now.
person Kam
schedule January 21, 2009 at 12:00 AM
okay... I've really enjoyed the story, and have been -- though I can't remember if I've reviewed before now (I usually wait until a story is complete.)

However... wonderful story, I've been patient... and it's been a month LOL I just finished rereading... update soon? pretty pretty please?
person kcat
schedule January 21, 2009 at 12:00 AM
pleeeeeeeeeeeeeeease update!!!!
pretty please? with a naked Harry and Fenrir on top
schedule January 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
It's been, like, a month! WHY WON'T YOU UPDATE??? *Pouts*

Pleeeease?
person kaia
schedule January 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This chapter was great, but when are your stories not great? I love Harry he is such a sweetie, Fenrir is also sweet! Oh please update soon I don't think I can wait much longer!
person Jay
schedule January 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
When are you updating?
person kitten
schedule January 8, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Loved this chappie! Please update soon, it's been at least 3 week! ;-;
schedule January 8, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I hope someone explains everything to poor little Harry soon! He's so cute! And Greyback is a big teddy bear! I like your story, especially the way you are having the characters act. Hope you update soon!
person Minty
schedule January 8, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I <3 you fanfic greatly...

Can you add me to when you update? email is
goddessminty@yahoo.com
schedule January 7, 2009 at 12:00 AM
No, sorry, can't wait any more. I'm going to have to start hounding you if you don't update soon. Waah! It's been AGES!!! And AGES!!!