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Why doesn't Paul want Harry to be Greyback's mate? Is he afraid his little brother won't be able to handle the Alpha?

please she's gotta read harry's name when reading Fenrir. Ah this is good, thought it took a long time, from my point of view. Waits for the next chapter. Good luck

Oh thank goodness you finally updated! I was beginning to lose hope lol, great chapter as always. Please update again soon <3.

OMG Great story I love it. XD Update soon please. =)

Oo, I bet the priestess has fixed it so that the other submissive gets read out as Fenrir's mate.

I love it so far , can't wait for the next chapter

yay you updated! I was getting worried! This chapter was spectacular! Greyback is so sweet towards Harry and i love Harrys personality! You portray the characters spectacularly! Please update soon!

Thanks for the e-mail, and the update. It was a great chapter. So, what the heck is up with Paul? Does he want Harry to be unhappy or something? The conversations between Harry and Greyback were really cute, and they're DEFINITELY mates, so I don't know what Paul's problem is. Anyway, I loved the new chapter, and I look forward to more. Will Greyback ever learn about exactly WHY Harry doesn't want to go home? Please update again soon. Cheers!

I nearly burst into tears when I saw you'd updated - seriously, I've been checking every day for months now, and I was starting to give up hope and then you updated! And it was such a wonderful chapter to break the fast! Yes, I know, when I like something I REALLY get into it. And I'm really into this story.

Isn't Fenrir so lovely to Harry? Paul was mean though. I hope it apologises. He means well. By the way, you write him very well - you could easily make him into a really nasty bastard; just another James - but no, I still quite like him. I mean, it's obvious his heart's in the right place and that he loves Harry.

I like the idea that dominants aren't allowed to swear in front of submissives - I noticed it in the early chapters but didn't comment. But I do think it's a good idea - it just helps underline the social differences between them. As well as the werewolves in the field - how the dominants were all fighting, and the submissives just sort of got all passive.

This chapter actually came at a good time, 'cause I just got my printer fixed. Y'see, I print out each chapter, so I always them whenever I want, and now you are probably kinda scared 'cause I sound like I'm stalking you. I'm *not*. I'm stalking your *story*. There's a difference.

Update soon? Pretty please with sugar lumps on top?

Ah! Just remembered. In chapter six, Fenrir's Beta was called Nile, and then in the last few he's been Lucius (who I'm assuming is Lucius Malfoy). Did you realise you'd done that? You probably did.

I'm so happy you updated! I love how you show Fenrir and Harry's growing relationship. Paul really pisses me off though!