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April 1, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oh wow, that is a serious twist... I really wonder who administered the drug...
Loved this chapter and how Alpha is all worried!!!
Loved this chapter and how Alpha is all worried!!!
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April 1, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oh my god! Someone DRUGGED Harry! Poor little Harry! How could you want to hurt him? He's just a fictional character and he makes me want to mother and cuddle him! Bastard, whoever it was.
It wasn't one of Harry's brothers, was it? I don't know who it could be, but I don't want it to be his brothers. I mean that'll seriously fuck the poor boy up.
But you updated! Ah. I actually squealed with excitement when I saw you'd updated. I scared the cat - she's ignoring me now, and it's all your fault! ;P
I do like Fenrir in this story. Bless his little bessotted heart. And I'm glad you cleared up the whole Nile/Lucius/Beta confusion.
It wasn't one of Harry's brothers, was it? I don't know who it could be, but I don't want it to be his brothers. I mean that'll seriously fuck the poor boy up.
But you updated! Ah. I actually squealed with excitement when I saw you'd updated. I scared the cat - she's ignoring me now, and it's all your fault! ;P
I do like Fenrir in this story. Bless his little bessotted heart. And I'm glad you cleared up the whole Nile/Lucius/Beta confusion.
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April 1, 2009 at 12:00 AM
OMG HARRY!!!!!! who would want to hurt poor harry, i know he's cute and all but RAPE!!! i can't wait to see who it was so that i can hate them fore the remainder of the storie! it's a really interesting plot twist! i only have one question though, how did he ingest the poision? Thanks for all your hard work this story is really interesting!
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March 31, 2009 at 12:00 AM
oh dear, this ain't good.....who were that stupid?
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March 31, 2009 at 12:00 AM
noooo.... harry! please be ok! i'll love this chapter! update soon!
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March 31, 2009 at 12:00 AM
What a cliffie! ACK! Poor Harry!
Obviously Fenrir wouldn't have done that. And neither would Caspian (right?). Richard doesn't seem too bad but Paul seemed so angry and in denial about Harry being Fenrir's mate last chapter. But would Paul really go so far as drug and then rape his younger brother to make him unappealing to Fenrir? I don't think so (although the evidence so far is pointing in that direction). I need the next chapter to be sure!
Keep going! I love this story!
Obviously Fenrir wouldn't have done that. And neither would Caspian (right?). Richard doesn't seem too bad but Paul seemed so angry and in denial about Harry being Fenrir's mate last chapter. But would Paul really go so far as drug and then rape his younger brother to make him unappealing to Fenrir? I don't think so (although the evidence so far is pointing in that direction). I need the next chapter to be sure!
Keep going! I love this story!
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March 31, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Wow....someone is trying to kill Harry??? I cannot wait for the next chapter.....maybe Harry will be able to have a happy moment now. The poor thing...first he is abused, then his brothers think he is nothing ( or come to his aid...too little too late I believe) and now this....Please make Harry at least cop a feel with Fenrir the next chapter.
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March 31, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Thank you for this chapter - it always makes my day when you update! and I'm sorry you didn't get your drive back.
THe plot thickens, which is his brothers wants to cause him that much pain and suffering, or feels he deserves Harry for himself? The contrast of Fenrir's physical bulk and "unpleasant" demeanor and his personality around Harry is absolutely wonderful. That he was willing to open up to Lucius and Nile and show his love made him a much more believable character, less one dimensional. And the difference between how the lovestruck Fenrir sees Harry and how Lucius sees him is very telling. One seeing him through "rose coloured glasses" and the other seeing the skinny, gawky boy he really is, is gently done, but just enough to make the reader see Harry as a young boy in a relationship with a much older man. My only criticism is that Lucius does not seem to be a fully formed character, there is the odd comment about him, and a little interaction between him and others but not enough to make him seem completely real.
THe plot thickens, which is his brothers wants to cause him that much pain and suffering, or feels he deserves Harry for himself? The contrast of Fenrir's physical bulk and "unpleasant" demeanor and his personality around Harry is absolutely wonderful. That he was willing to open up to Lucius and Nile and show his love made him a much more believable character, less one dimensional. And the difference between how the lovestruck Fenrir sees Harry and how Lucius sees him is very telling. One seeing him through "rose coloured glasses" and the other seeing the skinny, gawky boy he really is, is gently done, but just enough to make the reader see Harry as a young boy in a relationship with a much older man. My only criticism is that Lucius does not seem to be a fully formed character, there is the odd comment about him, and a little interaction between him and others but not enough to make him seem completely real.
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March 31, 2009 at 12:00 AM
oh, I am so sorry you didn't find it.
Thank you for the chapter, it was great.
Thank you for the chapter, it was great.
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March 31, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oh poor Harry! Who did this to him? It couldn't have been his brothers...could it?
I love the way Greyback reacted to Harry beign sick...it shows us that he really can be good for Harry.
I want to know what he will do once he finds whoever hurt Harry!
Great chapter! I can't wait for more!
I love the way Greyback reacted to Harry beign sick...it shows us that he really can be good for Harry.
I want to know what he will do once he finds whoever hurt Harry!
Great chapter! I can't wait for more!