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person Anon
schedule April 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I was sure I reviewed this chapter but I can't find it??? Oh well. My gawd, Draco went from hot to cold so fast I think my head is still spinning. How deliciously Slytherin of him to rip her bag so she had to stop and talk to him and then to drag her down to the nearest classroom and literally blow her mind. And I know they're teens but when he asked her to talk to him he should have bloody listened to what she was trying to tell him instead of sulking and storming off with the wrong idea.

I loved Harry being there for her and supporting her just when she needed it.

Chap 7 - Ah yes, I love this Hermione - I am witch, hear me roar. :) Go and get your wizard, honey!! And as for Draco and everything that's going on in his head - oh he don't know what's coming, do he? LOL

OMG dressed to kill and handcuffs to boot! I love it!! (loved the pictures too, yay to Margaritama for that idea) Loved the whole dominant scene and Draco's ready agreement to the matter. Quite the obediant little wizard when he wants to be.

Loved these lines - "Draco speared her with his tongue, reaching deep within her to drink and catch every drop of her desire" and "Draco's mouth sang with the taste of her." Naughtily poetic. :)
schedule April 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Awww man you left it before they got their freak on! NUTS!

I can't wait to see what happens, and wowee at those shoes and the dress1 I actually winced when I saw how high those heels were! How could anyone walk in those?...LOL

Anyway well done, I look forward to the next chappie.
person katiekrm
schedule April 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I loved it! Go Hermione! I'm glad Draco played along with her desires. She is his lady and mistress after all.
schedule April 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
YEAH! Hermione isn't broken! Whew. I was worried for a bit. lol I LOVED the way she took back control of her life. Co-dominance...hot...YES! Looking forward to more really soon. Thank you! HG4eva
schedule April 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Yay! That was so great. Glad they've worked it out. lol I can't wait for more!! Oh, and please tell me that we get to see Pansy's reaction to Draco being completely off limits! =D
person Coipje
schedule April 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I like it
:D as always ;)
schedule April 13, 2009 at 12:00 AM
very nice :o)
I like a dominant Hermione!!
update soon!!
person MegNutz
schedule April 13, 2009 at 12:00 AM
that was fucking hott that all I really have to say! :D can't wait for the next chapter!
schedule April 13, 2009 at 12:00 AM
OMG T - dear goodness. I need a glass of water...wait I need an entire pool to jump into. OH MY! That was utterly AMAZING! I love love love what you did at the end. Draco handcuffed and giving oral...oh lord! I want one, NOW!

And the "Fuck me." was priceless. As was her response. They seem to be on equal ground but who is the real Dom! LOL
person OpheliaS
schedule April 12, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Hm. I like the plot...
But I hate the way you make Hermione seem weak.
The Hermione we all love and respect is supposed to be an amazing girl who can overcome anybody and anything.
Please, please don't make her weak.
It makes me feel kind of embarrassed for her in a way.
Other than that, the story's great.