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April 21, 2009 at 12:00 AM
well that was hott!!!!and another great chapter I might add!! can't wait until the next one :D
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April 21, 2009 at 12:00 AM
fabulous first chap... i like the way that you hold us readers in suspense as to how your fics are going to go i never know what is going to happen from one chap to the next and i love that.... great dominance play between them loved it
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April 21, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Chap 2
what a great chap well hermione wanted to push him and push him she did.... ok so i think that if i were in hermiones shoes and draco just got all dominant on me i think that i would be getting myself off to and quick.... i liked that you wrote dracos view of that moment in this... reading that it effected him as well shows that they are moving there past relationship on to something wayyyy more yummy but people do say that there is a thin line between love and hate... so hermione does not like pansy all over draco... hmmm becoming possessive of draco is she... ha ha i loved this comment.. 'for good behavior of course' of course that was what brought hermione out of her little shell but boy was the moments leading up to that hot or what but of course it got all the hotter after she SLAPPED him which was brillant by the way... oohhh and when he stood up and got all dominant on her and hermione squeaked i think i would have moaned but that is me still the cat and mouse game they played was hot loved dracos warnings to hermione of not moving but move she did of course he caught her and he SPANKED her.... hang on woooo is it hot in here shit i think i need a cold shower and new panties..... i love that he carried her to bed he really gave it to her.... i can not wait to read how she is going to respond the next day that should be interesting
what a great chap well hermione wanted to push him and push him she did.... ok so i think that if i were in hermiones shoes and draco just got all dominant on me i think that i would be getting myself off to and quick.... i liked that you wrote dracos view of that moment in this... reading that it effected him as well shows that they are moving there past relationship on to something wayyyy more yummy but people do say that there is a thin line between love and hate... so hermione does not like pansy all over draco... hmmm becoming possessive of draco is she... ha ha i loved this comment.. 'for good behavior of course' of course that was what brought hermione out of her little shell but boy was the moments leading up to that hot or what but of course it got all the hotter after she SLAPPED him which was brillant by the way... oohhh and when he stood up and got all dominant on her and hermione squeaked i think i would have moaned but that is me still the cat and mouse game they played was hot loved dracos warnings to hermione of not moving but move she did of course he caught her and he SPANKED her.... hang on woooo is it hot in here shit i think i need a cold shower and new panties..... i love that he carried her to bed he really gave it to her.... i can not wait to read how she is going to respond the next day that should be interesting
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April 21, 2009 at 12:00 AM
chap 3
Ha ha ha she hid thats great i never really expected that but i like it just the same.... some could say she is being weak but i definitely do not think so i just think that she has found herself in a situation that she is NOT familiar with and it has knocked her off balance of course she needs sometime to figure things out although i am glad that draco decided to end her little sherade it is for her own good, i do think that she was starting to realize some things about herself like she needs a man to dominate her instead of her being the boss all of the time.... and she has her equal in draco and i think that they will both balance each other out bc i think that draco needs to be dominated once in a while too.... i loved her flashback to what happened in the great hall at breakfast ha ha i laughed i imagine draco loved seeing her bottom still smarting from his sting.... men love that shit my fiance always says its like getting a slap on the back when i feel the after effects for a couple of days... ahhhh you left us on a cliff although it was a very nice cliff how yummy is draco when he has her all trapped against the door i think at that point i would have been like i give take me do what you want pleaseeeee do what you want... :-)
Ha ha ha she hid thats great i never really expected that but i like it just the same.... some could say she is being weak but i definitely do not think so i just think that she has found herself in a situation that she is NOT familiar with and it has knocked her off balance of course she needs sometime to figure things out although i am glad that draco decided to end her little sherade it is for her own good, i do think that she was starting to realize some things about herself like she needs a man to dominate her instead of her being the boss all of the time.... and she has her equal in draco and i think that they will both balance each other out bc i think that draco needs to be dominated once in a while too.... i loved her flashback to what happened in the great hall at breakfast ha ha i laughed i imagine draco loved seeing her bottom still smarting from his sting.... men love that shit my fiance always says its like getting a slap on the back when i feel the after effects for a couple of days... ahhhh you left us on a cliff although it was a very nice cliff how yummy is draco when he has her all trapped against the door i think at that point i would have been like i give take me do what you want pleaseeeee do what you want... :-)
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April 21, 2009 at 12:00 AM
holy crap what a hot freaking chap.... loved it... he bit her clit holy shit how hot is that.... i love a possessive draco it makes me all hot... 'mine' :-)
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April 21, 2009 at 12:00 AM
ha ha what a great hex to place on pansy.... while i love the fics with pansy as a friend, i think she adds something to the story when she is involved in a good way, i love it when she is the on the opposite side you know the one that has troubloe coming to terms with the fact that draco is not hers.... she is so great in that role i think... so draco is not going to allow her to crawl back in that hidey hole thats good
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April 20, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Okay, you got me. :-) I loved it! And, yes, I smiled when I read "I
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April 20, 2009 at 12:00 AM
"Draco, my shoes." LOL - I love it.
I really really like what you did here. The changes were sexy yet you still kept him dominant which I think is key to your Draco. Despite the switching, I think he still likes to rule the bedroom roost. And I think she likes that as well.
I love how you had him explain that they enjoy variety in their sex life and that nothing is wrong with her. I didn't want to lose that, it's a crucial point because she wondered if there was something wrong with her. And I suspect many a young girl out there have felt this way and wondered the same thing.
Very fun, very sexy, very hot.
I really really like what you did here. The changes were sexy yet you still kept him dominant which I think is key to your Draco. Despite the switching, I think he still likes to rule the bedroom roost. And I think she likes that as well.
I love how you had him explain that they enjoy variety in their sex life and that nothing is wrong with her. I didn't want to lose that, it's a crucial point because she wondered if there was something wrong with her. And I suspect many a young girl out there have felt this way and wondered the same thing.
Very fun, very sexy, very hot.
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April 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
WONDERFUL....such a hot story please tell me that you are gonna finish it......PLEASE! Well done
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April 17, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 7
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