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July 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Nooooooooooooooooo!!! Bring on the next chapter. PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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July 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
lol ok she was a little weak but its forgiveable
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July 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Darn it, now I have to wait for the next post to see what's happening 'tonight'.
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July 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
YAY! Great part!
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July 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This is a really great story - thank you so much for writing it! Can't wait for more :)
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July 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
hey! i like your story a lot :D haha, it's funny to read what's going on each mind...it's like prey and its victim lol
keep updating, i'm waiting!
keep updating, i'm waiting!
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July 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Awesome story! Can't wait for the next bit
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July 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Update soon =D
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June 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
"As beautiful as he had been in the moonlight he was amazing when kissed by the sunlight." Ahhh, that line was sheer poetry. :) What a wonderful picture that brought to mind. *evil grin*
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June 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Writing is addicting, but reviews are like crack. lol I am loving this tale. It's hot, fun and good! I can't wait for more. I look forward to seeing what he's going to do when he catches her. lol ;-)
HG4eva
HG4eva