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interesting story, i dont agree with any of the fact, becouse all ron said to her was one hurt full thank and harry agreeed. hermonie call him stupid many times, and he had a fight with harry, had nothing to do with hermoine, and beouse of magic he left, there is more pain in harry who has far more darkness in side him.


but all that being said, i like it, hermoine love ron, but is not in love with him, and loves harry but afreaid to take that chance.

intreating story... i dont agree with homine point about ron... the two think i can think about is ron not stay with harry for the first part of goblin of fire... but he and when he left in the last book... both are bad thinks but one he just did not belive his friend and the other they mess with his mind... but he came back and saved there lives... homie forgets all the time that she yell at ron and told him he is stupid or just would not talk to him... she did stuff just as bad to him...

i could see homie going to marry ron and beinlove with harry and not tell him becouse she did not want to hurt his feelings...

i would have like it better if she just was not inlove with ron.... to say he is a bad person for the few bad think he did does not seem right.... there has been more then a few bad homie and harry moments that you are not counting..

i belive this story would be better if you had homie just not be in love with ron just becouse she is not.. but she loves hima does not want to hurt his feeling... maybe have it where he hurt his leg saveing her and she feel really guily
not a bad start to a story..

Aww, how sad, very well written though, good work!

to Mike Daniels: than why read fanfiction????

I liked it. Kind of sad..

This story is absolutely bloody superfluous. A waste of time and space. You are not telling anything even remotely new. Sorry to tell you that.

The implied Ron/Hermione sucks! Harry/Hermione forever!

Normally I'm not a fan of H/Hr or H/G (unless as part of a harem), but I can tolerate well written stories with the pair. This story has actually made me rethink some things. I honestly think that Harry would have been better with Hermione than Ginny (though red hair is a weakness of mine), and that Ron didn't deserve Hermione (mainly the points that you brought up about his temper, bitterness, and jealousy). He would have been better served with someone as shallow as he was capable of being, like Lavender.