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July 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
great story love it so far...i really hope you continue....
oh and did you mean "reeking havok"...instead of "reeking habit" at the end of the 3rd chapter?
oh and did you mean "reeking havok"...instead of "reeking habit" at the end of the 3rd chapter?
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July 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Poor Hermione T_T ---- waiting Draco in next chapter. (^_^
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July 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hey, this is looking good so far, can't wait to see how it pans out!
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July 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
You have a good plot going here, i do see some grammatical errors, but nothing too bad. I'd like to see where you take this! i'd like to make a small correction, i hope you don't mind, i am doing it in the spirit of helping another author the line..... He started for the castle, bent on reeking habit for one Hermione Granger.
reeking habit should be wreaking havoc. again its not a critiscism. like i said you have a great plot here and i would love to see you explore it to its potential. please don't be upset!
LadyBlueEyes
xoxoxo
reeking habit should be wreaking havoc. again its not a critiscism. like i said you have a great plot here and i would love to see you explore it to its potential. please don't be upset!
LadyBlueEyes
xoxoxo
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July 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
LOL Nothing like a sneaky Draco to get things going. ;)
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July 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Great update! I'm loving this story more and more.
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July 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Interesting idea, it's kinda humorous...the thought that someone could be so afraid of sex that they paralyze theirself.
I'm really looking forward to Draco's reaction. Good work.
I'm really looking forward to Draco's reaction. Good work.
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July 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This is a very interesting beginning and I am looking forward to more soon. Thanks! HG4eva
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July 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
WOW!!! I'm wondering if this some kind of spell and being intimately touched is the trigger???? LOL, not exactly sure if this has something to do with Ron or not now. Still, how low that after she tells him to back off he still tries to cop a feel. Granted, at the strart she wasn't exactly giving him the wrong signals, was she? But he definitely didn't notice when things changed. More please!!
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July 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I like it. Please update soon.