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schedule July 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
im loving it so far. glad that dracos being nice, since ron was an ass

its kind of weird that your bf is your beta lol because this is adultfanfiction.net im guessing it'll be smutty later on. but thats ok.

anyway mind emaiing me with the url when you write more?please
or i'll forget
schedule July 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Yess! I'm not a big fan of Ron, so I'm soo glad she's going to move on, and soo super happy that Draco is the one she's moving on with! Yay!
person Tootsie
schedule July 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
omg i want to know the continue, pls dont made me wait too long. =D
schedule July 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
ah so Draco makes a move and gets hermione alone. i wonder what will happen next. no lemons as you said but perhaps a small lime or two? can't wait to see how draco learns patience while coaxing hermione into eventually shagging. what is the name of the disorder hermione has? will we find out in the story? great update. and i really hope you weren't offended by my comment, i only meant to be helpful =)

Happy Writing!!

Lady B
xoxo
person Anon
schedule July 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oi, I could do with a bit of being kissed senseless too. LOL Oh to know what's going on in Draco's head right now......
schedule July 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I like it. Please update soon.
person Liveweak
schedule July 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Good job!
Glad you got a Beta, they're always fun to work with.
Love the plot, and I'm really interested in what that illness is.
schedule July 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Great ending...I can't believe she fainted!
I don't know how Draco is going to convince her into sex after that kind of reaction.
Update soon please. :)
person Anon
schedule July 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
As contradictory as 'warm chills' may be, I know exactly what you mean by that comment. *grins* And wow, there's really a medical condition like that? I can understand being interfered with during childhood could produce something like that (insert swearing about what some mongrels will do to innocent children) but I didn't know about it just existing. So much for my theory it might be a spell then. So Draco has this all planned out then.... very interesting. :)
schedule July 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oooh, So Draco knows, now! Hmmm, wonder how thats gonna pan out.. Can't wait!