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schedule August 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ok so that was hot so please update soon!!!
person Anon
schedule August 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Now that was just a bloody tease! How could you stop it there? LOL
schedule August 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
EVIL! *glares* For leaving it there you are truly evil! Great job!
schedule July 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Update soon please.
person Anon
schedule July 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Well of course if your boyfriend was back in town you'd have more interesting things to do than writing. ;) Blech on the cleaning though!! Poor Hermione, talk about going through a gauntlet of emotions once again. Still, she's made up her mind what she wants though and she's taking a chance and isn't that what love is all about????? :)
schedule July 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Very sweet and introspective chapter, good job! Oh, and Draco has GREY eyes, Narcissa has blue.
schedule July 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
MORE, MORE, HOTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTT, UPDATE
schedule July 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh ya! I loved how Malfoy reacted when Ron grabbed 'Mione. Loved it. Can't wait for more!
schedule July 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
the chapters are a bit short, but the storyline is good, but it could have been sooo much more, you shouldn't have sold this story to such chapters and dialogue. I did love the topic of discussion as well, course girl I did not think that was an actual disease, I always thought it could just be nerves. I did love the slap hermy gave ron though. Please update.
person Anon
schedule July 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
go figure, i've got to start reading when they're one chapter away from doing it! typical! i'll be keeping an eye out for the next chapter! good work!