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schedule December 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I like it. Please update soon.
person Anon
schedule November 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Updated? Merciless teasing more like it. ;) LOL Just giving us a little taste and leaving us wanting more huh?
schedule November 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I like it. Please update soon.
schedule November 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Actually, it's "wreaking havoc" as wreak means "to bring about" while wreck means "to ruin or destroy". You can blame spell check, which probably corrected a mis-spelled word into a correctly spelled word that wasn't the one you wanted to use. It happens all the time.

Other than that, I'm finding this story (I'm only on chapter three or four) highly amusing and enjoyable.
schedule November 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i like you here! please dont go.
person me
schedule November 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Your story is OK. You keep using phrases that do not make sense nor apply to the situation. Young are we?
schedule August 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oooh, more! please! Get to the good stuff already, hehe!
person amyfeddy
schedule August 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Omg don't stop now, you are evil and I love it. Could you possibly make the chapters a little longer, unless you're aiming to get us all wound up and leave us panting for more,if that's the case then you hit the nail on the head.
person bobbie
schedule August 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
dang that was hot, and we are just getting started...lol...you have got to post more and soon...He is going to teach her everything, and she is going to rock his world..and has anyone remembered birthcontrol...hehehehe...gotta love it..post more soon,,
person tootsie
schedule August 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I w a n t m o re !!!!