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i want more please. its fantastic and i love it!

I think it was great! Really hot!!!

This story is really great. I love the idea and the plot. There were some grammatical mistakes, especially with tenses and jargon. For example, "... she decided to begin getting ready." It should either be "...she decided to get ready" or "...she began to get ready." Otherwise, I loved the story! =) Please update again soon!