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for Dealing With the Consequences

by xsexxandxcandyx

person Citten
schedule August 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
well i have really enjoyed the last couple of chapters! though i really HATE what narcissa has done--boy i really hope that she gets her comupance! poor draco needs to know! well maybe ron can get on track now. ginny sounds a little like me--well a lot really. cant wait to see what happens next. :)
two little things though: one make sure to check your pronouns-cause i was (am) really confused about the doctor, is it a man or woman? two is how far along is hermione-really? first i taught it was like five months cause she is showing though towards the end i taught three then about five or six--so i am just a little confused, sorry! hope that helps and so could you be just a little more discribtive on time that should help. THANKS! i will be wait and wanting more, also you are doing great!!! :)
schedule August 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
man ... will draco find out what is mother did first or will he see mione first please please update soon .. later for now

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person Janeplay
schedule August 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Cool story! Will there be a Draco Ron fight? Pls?!
schedule August 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
So what's Narcissa planning on doing when when Draco eventually end up running into one another and Hermione is either A.) Very Preggers or B.) Just had a baby and Draco is shocked by this knowledge? And what's she going to do if the baby ends up looking like a Malfoy? She's setting herself up. I know she thinks she's protecting him thereby making her intentions somewhat "good", but, well...we all know what they say about the road to hell eh? Great update I can't wait for more!!
schedule August 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
oh gosh I have been waiting for this chapter for so long, please keep the great work coming, I really love this story, and OMG narcissa is such a bitch for hiding this and poor hermione, gosh please, please update again soon.
schedule August 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
YES I MISSED YOU!!!! i love the chap too but you more!hahhahahaa
schedule July 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
UPDATE UPDATE
schedule July 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
oMG OMG UPDATE UPDATE, this is going way tooo good. Please update soon.
person kazfeist
schedule July 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I've enjoyed this story so far. I'm glad you've set it for after the war, and that you only have Narcissa and Draco in the story. I can see that Narcissa will end up being supportive. Looking forward to more updates. :D
person Amaya
schedule July 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Good job in this chap. i wonder how draco will take the news. especially about the baby being a girl. maybe he would have prefered a boy. well it's all up to you :D