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for Dealing With the Consequences

by xsexxandxcandyx

person kazfeist
schedule September 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Thanks for the two chapter updates! I'll just bet that Blaise knows what's going on! Hopefully, Draco will find out soon, too. As for my email, it's kazfeist at gmail dot com. :D
person Robyn Hawkes
schedule September 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I just reread from the beginning and the same thing bothers me still. If Draco is considered an adult in the wizarding world then he is the head of the Malfoy family. If he is the head why hasn't he taken over his father's desk and study?
schedule September 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hello. I've been reading the story since your third update and I am interested in seeing more of it soon. I have a feeling when he finally finds out about the baby, and realizes Narcissa kept it from him, the action will really pick up. I look forward to it. Thanks! HG4eva
person Jess
schedule September 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Yay, two updates since I last read this! I loved Hermione correcting Molly about pregnancy eating habits. I also like that we're getting more from Draco's perspective, but um, I'm not sure if you've already explained this or not, but why exactly is Draco having so much trouble sleeping? I can't wait til he finds out about the baby. I want to know how he'll react to it all.

Poor Hermione feeling so alone and thinking Draco wants nothing to do with her or the baby. And the whole thing with Ron, I can understand that Ron is a bit of a git sometimes, but I'm surprised he just stopped talking to her after their almost kiss. I mean, he really can't expect her to want to start a new relationship (with him or anyone else) while she's about to have someone else's baby.

Well at least Harry and Ginny are still supportive. I do think Hermione should apply for that teaching job. It's that unthinkable to work while having a baby. I work full-time, go to school full-time and have a one-year old. It's not exactly easy and you might lose some sleep, but it's definitely not impossible.
schedule September 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
oh my he was sooooo close to finding out, ARGHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I hope his mother rots in hades, I think i pulled out alot of hair.
We finally get to see what his thoughts r and how he had problems and how he came through the war, and I think it was a very important chapter in order to solidify his part and emotional structure to the story. He cares for hermione deeply, which shocked me a bit, just a bit cause on the level of caring. I cant wait to read when he finds out that he is gonna be a dad, and he will have to be the one for her, it will make him stronger, and his mother is just standing in the way of him growing and finally becoming a man.
POOR hermione, I have said once and I will say it again the girl is not having an easy time, and she should realize that everyone is just trying to be there for especially harry, and I hate molly's meddling, that woman drives me up a wall sometimes. I hope she does apply to hogwarts and I hope draco finds out soon cause I really cant take the suspense anymore, my head is gonna explode. And Ron needs to be tapped several times, he is an ass of the highest caliber....sigh. please update soon, dont leave me hanging for long dont know if I can take it.
And I am glad u will email if u need my help.

Respect
Scarlet
schedule September 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hey kay,
Oh gosh, thanks finanly for the new chappy and the onsite nod, sorry bout the beta and if ever u need help my email is scarlet_witch_extreme@hotmail.com, email any time, cause I really and badly want to see this story progess and reach far, not to have it swept aside when I am so addicted to it. Please keep the chapters coming, cause this shit is getting good, and although I am getting infuriated over narcissa i know it is essential to the story. Poor, poor, poor hermione, she is having it rough, and poor draco getting all the blame in her mind, that old batty bitch of a malfoy, i hope hermione hides her child from a woman like that after everything has came out. I would do that I never let my child near someone who doesn't want to acknowledge them from the beginning, I am really bitchy like that. sigh...i get so excited everytime I see an update for this story, so please if ever u need help email me and it shall be done, so plz keep the chapters coming, my insides r squirming. update!!!!!!!
schedule September 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i only saw one mistake so you didn't do a bad job grammar wise. I really love your fic. i can't wait for draco to find out. i like that Narcissa kind of guilty keeping the secret and how she seems to crave to have a grandchild. Poor Ron he still really cares for hermoine but i think you can think of someone who would suit him better that hermoine cause i still want her to end up with Draco. you really haven't mention this much but does hermoine still care about draco or she going to realise it later. Oh i so love this story. Keep giving me more chapters it's my addiction. Bye :)
person kazfeist
schedule September 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Good chapter....but I hope Draco finds out soon. :D
person sky
schedule August 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I just read the first chapter, and all I have to say is... WOOT!!!!!!! OMFG!!!! It's so hot, I actually can't read any more just now, but i will definitely be following this story. Keep up the awesome writing. -sky :)
person Anon
schedule August 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
ok, i really like this story, so you have got to post more on it..i cant wait to read whats going to happen, so please post more soon.. its really good..