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Awww, so sweet. I loved it. You are very fortunate to have had such wonderful grandparents in your life and they for having a granddaughter who obviously loves them. A Great read. Thanks for sharing. p

i nearly cried from how adorable this was. not an ounce squicky! would fav if i had an account... *goes to work on that*

LOve it :D

One of the nicest one-shot I've ever read!

Eh... squiiiiccckk... *shudder*

Well, truthfully it was rather sweet... but the "cold hand sneaking down the pajama bottoms" thing actually made me wince. I have a vivid imagination, you see, as I'm sure many here do... as well as a slight fear of the elderly.

Anyway, very sweet if a tad squicky. Your good at slice of life fics, please consider whipping out some more.

Cute!

At least when it finally happens, it sounds like Lucius will go out with a 'bang', heh, heh. I bet Hermione's son knows about the virility potion because he uses it, too. He's probably no spring chicken.

If Hermione is having trouble with her hips and Lucius is arthritic in his knees, they must have a heck of time in the bedroom. They suffer from so many symptoms of advanced age, I don't know how they manage to keep breathing, much less cavort in bed, those randy rascals. Ah, it looks like the only kinky things left for them are their joints, poor dears. Oooh, cold hands on the groin - hot turn-on for Mr. Grampie Malfoy. That's one benefit for them, Hermione's poor circulation.

Still snarky and scrappy. That must be how they've lasted so long, in bed and out. A lovely family. (Sad that Draco died...Narcissa? Who?)

This is a cute story showing our pair in a whole new light, not that they could see with it too well. I think I will just go hunt up my multi-vitamins, now.

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If they are well into their second centuries, that would put them somewhere between 100 and 200. That is a person's second century. Hermione's age appears to be 220, so she has entered her third century.

Ok I loved this and it made me think of my papaw. When I was younger about 12 which would of made my papaw like 85 and my mamaw 83 I stayed the summer with them. They had seperate bedrooms because my papaw snored and my mamaw couldnt stand it. I had came home from playing out and about with my friends and heard my mamaw moaning which i thought was in pain. That was the worst thing I could of possibly ever seen. And i really really wish I would of never know about that because it wouldn't of hurt me. :-) Great story I loved it. Especially how his granddaughters were doing cartwheels and he couldn't figure it out in front of the window. And trying to get them to be proper young ladies. :) Keep up the Wonderful Work!!!!!

That was so sweet......=)

Sweet! Your Grandpa George certainly had a laugh at this while reading it in heaven. Bless him! Oh, I know exactly what your grandparents must have been like. Cause I had them by myself. My late grandpa, God bless him, and my grandma were married over 50 years. And up till my granddad died the two held hands in bed. (Everything else I don't want to think about.) They were just like Lucius and Moine in your story. Well not exactly the age and without magic. Whatever I did, I was allowed to. The family was first, specially the only granddaughter - me. It was a beautiful time. I miss it.
When I read the story I could see you doing cartwheels and sitting on your grandpa George's lap as a child. Really sweet!
It is a cool idea to write about an aged Lucius and Moine. And the way you did it contained everything. (If toooooo short!) I had to laugh (Moine's thoughts while with Scorpius) and cry (when the couple held hands in bed). I think that qualifies it for a really good story.
Thank you for that look behind the curtains of a future Malfoy Manor.
LOL, Alex