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for Over the Desk!

by lepusia

person Anon
schedule October 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
person Anon
schedule July 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
person MB3
schedule June 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I've just finished reading both of your stories. In both, I have found some tense and grammer errors. Besides that, I absolutely loved them. Your plots are interesting and intriguing. I would suggest reading a chapter out loud before you post it or getting a beta to help cut down on some of the grammatical and tense errors. Hope to read something else from you soon!