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I'm still quite annoyed about the 'mute' Harry but I was astonished how much Severus seams to miss him. 'No touch' is cruel, because human beings need touching. Well, I hope they will learn to be together without 'fucking', you don't need that to be close together.

Man I was trying to finish reading so I could review and another chapter showed up, that has never happened before. That was not a complaint the chapter was a pleasant surprise.

I am glad Harry is going to get a chance at learning how to talk, read and write. While it is really cute the way he goes Mah! love!, we know things really have to change plus Severus deserves to have a real lover and Harry can't do that yet.

Lucius worries me; he is going to do something evil now that he is bored. Is he capable of loving somebody other than himself? It seems that the worse punishment he could get would be to actually love somebody and have to live in fear for them the way everybody around him do. He is a scary man in a scary society. Maybe Hermione will change some things when she makes it to the Ministry.

Is Narcissa going to have an active character? He has been awful quiet (other than the moaning). I would like to hear what she has to say about her husband giving away their sex slave to Draco; won

Well, this bedtime-story was a tasty cake. Thanks a bunch!

That is the second time this scene has almost made me cry. And I played Severus. *wahhhh*

OK, I'm reluctant to say so, but your idea of "sexual slave being public property" is even more perverse than your chan setting. Sorry, but this is going just too far. Why would anyone want to own a wandering sack of germs? Don

Ch. 15 Well, I hope the fucking stops. Sorry, but this was really getting sicker and sicker. I mean, a lot of writers write chan, because most of the characters are children or teenagers. But you are overdoing it. You seem to celebrate sex with children and make them sound younger but wild for sex. Sorry, but I can't see it. Not like that. Any school can be better than a child who has to have sex with adults. Even with Dolores Umbridge as a stuff member. Have I got it right? I think Harry is no slave anymore. At least, I hope so.

Nice. I liked your A.N. at the end the most. The A.N.'s don't detract from the story; in fact it's completely the opposite. For me your A.N.'s enhance the experience of reading this story. Anyways, I hope you can update again soon. I can't wait. Until then! :)

This one is sooo cute, I love it. And I'm quite interested in Remus' reprimand. I think he needs one, because he surely feels guilty...

This fic is great, please update soon

You meanie... ;) I'm sorry that I didn't review sooner, but I was so caught up reading until now. I like the way Severus and Draco treat their "Slaves"... They do it at as equal terms as possible. They are respectful and loving, and they put there own desires on the second place. I love your story so far and I'm happy because you update as often as possible. Thank you!