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August 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow! Could you make Lucius into more of a bastard!? I mean he's always been one, but you've made him above and beyond of a Bastard!
I can't wait to see how Severus doing with his mission, Harry with his study and Draco/Remus! Gods I can't wait to know what's going to happen top them!
Please update chapter 33 soon ^_^
Jan
I can't wait to see how Severus doing with his mission, Harry with his study and Draco/Remus! Gods I can't wait to know what's going to happen top them!
Please update chapter 33 soon ^_^
Jan
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August 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Jesus, just when I thought Lucius couldn't stoop any lower...
Great writing! update!
Great writing! update!
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August 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ack! A dragon's eye? Yikes!
I loved the fluffy moment at the end there. Very sweet.
Keep Severus safe!
update!
I loved the fluffy moment at the end there. Very sweet.
Keep Severus safe!
update!
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August 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
LOL, Little Red Hood sexy made...
But I wonder why was Dumbledore so careless. If I were him, I'd have let the dirty old git swear the Unbreakable Wow to Severus that he would release Harry if he gets the Dragon Eye. This way, I know he is going to manage, barely surviving, and get tricked afterwards... A little too predictable. OK, I'm spoiled, I read too much Emily Waters...
But I wonder why was Dumbledore so careless. If I were him, I'd have let the dirty old git swear the Unbreakable Wow to Severus that he would release Harry if he gets the Dragon Eye. This way, I know he is going to manage, barely surviving, and get tricked afterwards... A little too predictable. OK, I'm spoiled, I read too much Emily Waters...
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August 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I love this story!!
You made me cry ;-;
Please please please!free harry and let him be with Sev ~~~ KILL LUCIUS
Update soon {:
You made me cry ;-;
Please please please!free harry and let him be with Sev ~~~ KILL LUCIUS
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July 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i've really enjoyed reading this story and love the sweet relationship between severus and harry. i'm looking forward to reading more but very rarely check out the AU section of AFF. Is there any chance of an update email? tanyajones71@hotmail.com
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July 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
If making someone free is so simple, why didn't Harry become free in the first place? There has to be some sort of condition before Harry can become free...
Good story!
update!
Good story!
update!
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July 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I hope that their plan works too.
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July 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
How dumb must Dumbledore be, not to:
1. Get the real idea with the adopting from the very start. (That's something even Severus must have known)
2. Not to find out, who's owl Pig is?
And there are SCHOOL OWLS at Hogwarts, anyone can use them!
1. Get the real idea with the adopting from the very start. (That's something even Severus must have known)
2. Not to find out, who's owl Pig is?
And there are SCHOOL OWLS at Hogwarts, anyone can use them!
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July 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
As a beta I feel I should warn you. Do not shorten a persons Title.
Always write the full word. So no more Prof. Rather use Professor.
Always write the full word. So no more Prof. Rather use Professor.