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October 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
this is a good story... once i got past everyone being so young...
but you would get more reviews if you put this under the Snarry section.
but you would get more reviews if you put this under the Snarry section.
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October 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
That figures, I stop checking for updates for a couple of weeks and suddenly the are two updates.
Is a good thing Harry has gotten good at speaking or he would have never been able to tell anybody his name, not to sound cruel but I would have loved to hear him say it. I like that Harry is going to get to be courted, not only he deserves it but this will be a great way for Severus to make sure Harry really loves him and not just depend emotionally from him. The cool thing is that this is not real time and we wont have to wait forever to get some smut. Yeayyyy!
Is a good thing Harry has gotten good at speaking or he would have never been able to tell anybody his name, not to sound cruel but I would have loved to hear him say it. I like that Harry is going to get to be courted, not only he deserves it but this will be a great way for Severus to make sure Harry really loves him and not just depend emotionally from him. The cool thing is that this is not real time and we wont have to wait forever to get some smut. Yeayyyy!
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September 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Awesome chapter.
I can't wait to see what Severus will do to Harry's past masters!
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I can't wait to see what Severus will do to Harry's past masters!
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September 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oooooohhooooo, where are youuuuu
Is everything ok? I was trying to wait patiently but that got boring. So I thought maybe you need a gentle prod. Um, prod, prod, prod, poke, prod...
Is everything ok? I was trying to wait patiently but that got boring. So I thought maybe you need a gentle prod. Um, prod, prod, prod, poke, prod...
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September 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hehehe! Bye bye Godric! That was too good to be true!!
It's a very good story, but you should be made aware that almost your entire plot is coming through only in the dialogue it appears. The beginning was very good, but the environmental description have gotten fewer and farther in between. Makes the story a bit harder to read. Anyway, looking forward to more!!
Cheers!
It's a very good story, but you should be made aware that almost your entire plot is coming through only in the dialogue it appears. The beginning was very good, but the environmental description have gotten fewer and farther in between. Makes the story a bit harder to read. Anyway, looking forward to more!!
Cheers!
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August 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
"According to Harry Potter Wikia, J.K. Rowling revealed that Godric is the only one among the founders of Hogwarts who is still alive. He lives in the school lake as a Giant Squid Animagus and will appear in human form every eleventh hour of each night to wander around the school grounds before returning to the lake." What?? Are you sure? That seems pretty out there... even for the Magical World. Why isn't Godric dead? Being permanently in your Animagus doesn't extend your life like that.
Anyway, that was a good chapter. I loved all the little things Harry has done throughout the school. I supposed Harry is a Creature Charmer then from Charlie's description.
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Anyway, that was a good chapter. I loved all the little things Harry has done throughout the school. I supposed Harry is a Creature Charmer then from Charlie's description.
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August 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow! Harry's been a busy bee hasn't he! To think that while he was doing all this for all those people and creatures, he has also being raped by that bastard of a man!
I can't wait to see what's going to happen next with Severus vs Dragon ^_^
Please update chapter 35 soon!
Jan
I can't wait to see what's going to happen next with Severus vs Dragon ^_^
Please update chapter 35 soon!
Jan
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August 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OMG!!! I hope Severus get's to Harry before Tom does!
Please update chapter 34 soon ^_^
Jan
Please update chapter 34 soon ^_^
Jan
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August 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh I love Charley!!!
Poor, poor Hagrid. I am glad that he is around to help Severus but really it was cruel of Albus to send him on such a long trip with Mr. Cranky.
But for the important part. AAAAAHHHHH, what happened with Remus? Lucius is so f...ing evil. I know they are not the starring pair but they are so sweet.
Crap, Tom is back. Goodnes so many things happening, this story is getting so exciting. Keep it up.
Poor, poor Hagrid. I am glad that he is around to help Severus but really it was cruel of Albus to send him on such a long trip with Mr. Cranky.
But for the important part. AAAAAHHHHH, what happened with Remus? Lucius is so f...ing evil. I know they are not the starring pair but they are so sweet.
Crap, Tom is back. Goodnes so many things happening, this story is getting so exciting. Keep it up.
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August 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Jeez, just when things were looking up...
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