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for I'm A Slave for You

by BlackGargie

schedule February 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
LOL! Durex commercial!
person paganwoman
schedule February 18, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Just read entire story in one day. Family not speaking to me. Where I come from, Lucius would be cut up and used for catfish bait! Anyway, I really enjoyed to progression of the characters and watching them grow along the way. Happily awaiting updates
person Jan
schedule February 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Poor Draco, I truly feel for him. Gods, I just love those moments with Harry and Severus *chuckles*

Please update chapter 46 soon ^_^

Jan
schedule February 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Lovely! Finally a 'real' love-making, with all, that belongs there. But Harry should still sometimes call him Master, when Severus wants to hear it, just not every time. A bit of role-play is never wrong.
person Jan
schedule February 9, 2009 at 12:00 AM
LOL! Gods, you just gotta luv Albus ^_^

Please update chapter 44 soon.

Jan
person cravedom
schedule January 24, 2009 at 12:00 AM
You are not quiting this are you? I imagine that it must be a pain to keep going when your story keeps getting kidnaped but you have writen so much of it already.

I hope you can get back to the story soon.
person cravedom
schedule November 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I am way behind on my reading.

Poor Draco, he's been having the worse luck lately. I am worried about Remus, there is no telling what Lucius and Narcissa will do to him. This side of the story gets more and more interesting and it is a good complement to Harry/Snape. The sex life of the Old Couple however you can keep a mystery, please! What about the slave law? Are slaves allowed to have children? Will the children be free?
person celestialuna
schedule October 31, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Please consider this 40 reviews of, Awesome story, loved all the chapters, loved how you portrayed Harry being all cute and childlike. Definately one of the best stories I'm reading, can't wait for more!
person GemJewel
schedule October 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This is good so far. As a heads up if your doing the Udon cart owner as Japanese then the Japanese people have a hard time saying "l" and all of their "l"s sound like "r". So Charlie wouldn't be Challee but Charree.
person GemJewel
schedule October 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
this is really good! I hope that you can update soon!