rate_review Reviews

I have been going through and reading all the Harry and Draco stories that I find interesting. I must say that this was decently done for a one-shot and I had enjoyed reading it because you were able to capture so many emotions within the story. Fantastic job. I do think someone should have realized Lily lost her mind and watched Harry more, but understanding that they didn't think she had completely lost it. Very nice ending with him being able to feel some of the weight lifting off his shoulder.

This was good, but it was also sick. I couldn't even read Lily molesting her own son. She should be ashamed of herself. Someone should have stopped her sooner. Harry should have realized that no parent would do this to their child, even if she had lost her husband. Her son was much, much younger and she was just sick in the head and draco saying it was okay was just sick, I hope he was joking. Your writing is good, your talented but this story was just really, really hard on the eyes. I think any parent who molests their child, deserves to be beaten to death by serial killers and women rapists. Sorry, if it sounds like I hold a big grudge, I just do, who with a full brain doesn't? raping a child is so wrong in so many ways. If I could save all the children who have been beaten or raped by a parent, I would. I'd be like Supergirl.

Not my normal read by a long shot, I must say. I liked the way the story flourished out and didn't stay focused on one thing too long... Though it lacked true gripping emotion, to be honest if it had contained it though I probably would not have finished reading it. I can only handle so much morbid emotion these days. To write is an art, and a reader should appreciate such art. I like you tying in the Greek stuff as well as firmly painting lily as being in the wrong but also allowing the readers to sympithis with her to some small degree... Anyway, I hope these thoughts help. Not sure I'm twisted enough to reserve a chair in hell but I'll be sure to say hi if by chance I see you there. Though if if you end up with wings you can still look me up :) (couldn't resist :P)

KCK-Lumcer

i see nothing wrong with harry/lily. if you look at this site you will find harry/james who is harry's father, harry/voldimort who is old enought to be harry's grandfather and in some stories IS his grandfarher or even his father, not to mention all the other guys like sirius who are a father figure to harry or harry/petunia there are a few of those here as well.

That was...really......wow. I can't even describe it. It was magnificent.

Mmm... should I say interesting?
I was very afraid to read this story, it was better then I thought.

Congratulations on a great story. Love your take on Lily/Harry -- she's so disturbed and manipulative, and it's all so wrong, but so hot -- especially the scene where Lily climbs on top of sleeping Harry. You write a good Hermione too, I really liked her in this. And the Harry/Draco comfort-loving was sweet! Nice fic.

For whatever reason, while I was reading the second to last paragraph, I started tearing up. I read your other story Too much and absolutely love it! I haven't gotten to any of your other stories yet. I love your writing style and the all out ANGST.

well done i saw this csi episode for the 1st time a couple of weeks ago and thought hey that'd make for an interesting twist in the HP universe, i'm glad someone took the idea and ran with it in such a well considered way. kudos!

Now this was a story line I've never seen before!!! Well done!