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June 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh my poor Harry. I must say Voldemort sure did move fast. Now what was that scream
Update soon
Update soon
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June 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
interesting beginning
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June 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Interesting. i really like this story.
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June 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
A nice start to the story you definately have me intrigued. Yes Snape was a little out of character but not so much Dumbledore. This chapter was a little rushed, don't be afraid to extend it a little (without dragging it out too much with boring nothingness). Please email me when you update? gypsy_willow90@hotmail.com
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June 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I think this was a great start, and I definately want to read more... going to keep my eyes open!
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June 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OK...now you revved on the engine....you need to step on the gas and go with it.
What I'm saying is...I need more, you got me hooked, now throw me some gas baby.
....hehe - loved to see where you go with this. Love it so far - Great 1st chapter.
What I'm saying is...I need more, you got me hooked, now throw me some gas baby.
....hehe - loved to see where you go with this. Love it so far - Great 1st chapter.
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June 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Interesting start. Now will Severus still be spying since Voldemort didnt call him like he did Crouch
Update soon
Update soon
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June 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I liked your story it is very good. Cant wait for the update.
~Ruby~
~Ruby~
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June 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I have a feeling this is going to get very dark and creepy. It has great potential, so I hope you continue it soon.
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June 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Looks really good so far. I really like it. Harry will be will voldermort in this story though right? Anyway cant wait to see the nect chapter to this!