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for The Invisible Girl

by midnightmasquerade

schedule July 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Will there be a sequel? there has to be one!
schedule June 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i really like it!
person Anon
schedule June 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Damn, I wish I had that spell. LOL What fun!! I laughed when the elastic on her knickers stung her. She did a good job of finding them again or is it because she's invisible she could still see her clothes? I know she couldn't see herself when she looked down at the chair but I figure a smart girl like her would already know how to adjust it to her liking. LOL NICE!!
schedule June 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Great one shot!
But it is screaming sequel or at least three more chapters.
Especially to find out what fantasy girl Draco was looking for and what he thought when he realised it was Hermione.
schedule June 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This would be good if you choose to continue it...Perhaps Draco's reaction and after thoughts? I liked this anyway :D
schedule June 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Thoroughly delightful!!!!! I loved it!!!!
schedule June 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
wow i love it. to bad its a one shot.
~Ruby~
person luvhp
schedule June 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Nice one shot. Anything that contains: Draco/Hermione/Library is bound to be good!!
Well done.
schedule June 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Very good...you could always add to this if you wanted.