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April 17, 2009 at 12:00 AM
C'mon, where's the rest of it? I've read so many MWPP tales but this is the first one I've seen taking the Animagus transformation from this angle. You've definitely got me hooked. So please, keep writing! What you've done so far is great.
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November 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh snap! I mean, I assume he's going to change back, but damn! That's definitely a cliff hanger there.... Keep writing! It's a good story!
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August 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Cool mini chapter and a cliffy to boot!
I know the lack of reviews can be disheartening but I advise caution when asking readers to review. When I starting publishing my fanfic stories, I too was naffed off at this and had a rant but this backfired as it attracted a lot of negative comments from readers about whoring for reviews etc... and this threw me for a while.
Fanfiction dot net readers do tend to review more, so you might want to consider posting on there too. Don't take it too seriously though. A handful of honest and sincere reviews are worth scores of one-off reviewers with submitting bland comments.
See you next chappie. X
I know the lack of reviews can be disheartening but I advise caution when asking readers to review. When I starting publishing my fanfic stories, I too was naffed off at this and had a rant but this backfired as it attracted a lot of negative comments from readers about whoring for reviews etc... and this threw me for a while.
Fanfiction dot net readers do tend to review more, so you might want to consider posting on there too. Don't take it too seriously though. A handful of honest and sincere reviews are worth scores of one-off reviewers with submitting bland comments.
See you next chappie. X
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August 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
*Tail wag* I like so far! I like! More?
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August 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
WOW! I like it.
Your writing style and format have improved greatly. It is obvious that both you and your beta have worked very hard on these.
Brava, fab update. More please.
(P.S. My apologies if this review is repeated twice; my 'pute is play up.)
Your writing style and format have improved greatly. It is obvious that both you and your beta have worked very hard on these.
Brava, fab update. More please.
(P.S. My apologies if this review is repeated twice; my 'pute is play up.)
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August 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Thanks for reviewing my fic. When I read that you had written one yourself AND the fact that no one had bothered to review it, I just had to read it and write you a review. I know how demoralising it can be to a writer when you see many hits you're getting and no one leaves a review. If it's any consolation though, the number of readers who actual review on this site is relatively low.
Anyway down to business!
I thought that this fic does have potential and is very good for a first effort (believe me, I have seen some horrors published on this and other fanfic sites!). Your writing style will improve as you and the story progresses and you could benefit from using a beta. I personally don't use one because 1) I recently change ISP and lost the email address of the kind lady who beta'd one of my chapters and 2) I lack patience of waiting to publish.
My advice to you is don't take flames serious, take on board constructive critism but first and foremost this is your story and be true to your muse and finally, enjoy writing.
You have got yourself a regular reader and reviewer in me! ;)
Anyway down to business!
I thought that this fic does have potential and is very good for a first effort (believe me, I have seen some horrors published on this and other fanfic sites!). Your writing style will improve as you and the story progresses and you could benefit from using a beta. I personally don't use one because 1) I recently change ISP and lost the email address of the kind lady who beta'd one of my chapters and 2) I lack patience of waiting to publish.
My advice to you is don't take flames serious, take on board constructive critism but first and foremost this is your story and be true to your muse and finally, enjoy writing.
You have got yourself a regular reader and reviewer in me! ;)