rate_review Reviews

OH please continue the fast updates. It makes your story lovelier to read

(Chapter 4)

Oh..clever! And now you've got me totally enthralled, and dying for the next chapter! How did "David" manage to slip through the Auror recon, (because of McLaggen?) and why would Harry run? His cover is already blown, and they know who one another are....so why would Harry flee?

Update soon please! I'm loving this story!

oh poor harry!hahhahaha

OH I cant wait to see what happens next please please update!~

I like this a lot. It's more (don't know how to explain this) real, somehow, than most other stories. Sort of murder-mystery-ish, and Harry is sort of weary and a bit world-beaten. Very nice. If you have a mailing list for updates, please add me. jillianetpr@yahoo.com

(Chapter 3)


And the plot thickens. I love a good mystery! This is well written too, and I have the feeling it's going to keep me guessing. I love Harry and his interactions with Teddy, and I like Cottenham....he reminds me a little bit of Severus Snape. And Harry thinking he's seen Hedwig in the sky....very intriguing. Love this story! As I read it I can see it playing out in my head, that's how well this is written. Can't wait for the next chapter. Please update soon!

I can't wait for you to add more chapters to this story it looks really good. PLease update regularily and I shall keep watch of your story.

oh i do love it!!!