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for Out of the Night that Covers Me

by Mephistedes

person Jilliane
schedule July 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
(Chapter 7)

The midnight ride to Cardiff with a load of barking chinchillas.....too funny! And Rhys will probably go off his nut when he wakes and finds his beloved "chins" gone.

Oh but then there's another murder when they get back and this time it's a fellow Auror...who must also be a Gryffindor.(?) The plot thickens! And I hate cliffies! Please hurry and update soon!
person Luvdonite
schedule June 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
omg. this story is awesome. the humor is also great. i was giggling through the whole thing. im glad i found it. anyways, update soon.
person Jilliane
schedule June 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
(Chapter 6)

"I'm not filling your slot, Potter, so don't work youself into a state," Draco leered at him unkindly.

"Right," Harry winced,tasting bile at the back of his throat. "I'm just going to rinse my mouth out with shampoo, shall I? Don't want anymore of that crap coming out of there."



Again, I love the banter and the humour in this story, along with the detective/murder mystery plot. This is just fabulous, a very enjoyable read that just keeps getting better and better. Bravo to you! I can't wait for the update, and to see what Rhys is doing with all those chincillas, as well as more of the Harry/Draco innuendo laden banter. Just excellent!
person bigkt
schedule June 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
this is a really interesting story and I love harry with teddy. can't wait to read more!
schedule June 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh tooo funny! I sooo need chapter 7!!!
schedule June 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
ahh lol...normaly at this point i would say get on with the lovin lol but im an animal lover through and through and i want to see harry and draco kick some animal hatin ass lol but really great story!
schedule June 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Should be fun!!! Sooo need chapter 6!!!
schedule June 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
totally need more!
schedule June 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
very interesting story, cant wait for more!
person Jilliane
schedule June 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
(Chapter 5)


I LOVE this story! It just keeps getting better and better. I love everything about it. The banter between Harry and the people he associates with, the fact that Harry isn't perfect in this, the appearance of Draco and that he's working for the French, Harry's devotion to Teddy, the mystery of why and how former Gryffindor Quidditch players are suddenly being offed.....it's got it all....murder, mystery, intrigue, a terrific plot, entertaining and well written dialogue, perhaps romance on the horizon....everything! I can't wait to read more....and more.....and MORE! I know you said it would be a few days before the next update, but please hurry! I'm loving this and I want it all NOW!