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for Out of the Night that Covers Me

by Mephistedes

schedule January 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Good heavens. I loved this so much. I didn't recognize the poem until you had them reciting it at the playground in the beginning. I only knew it because I've read Lomonaaeren's work. I hope you don't mind if I rec this in my journal. If you do, my email is callistianstar@gmail.com, and my lj is "callistianstar."

This was such a fabulous story. I have such a love for detective/mystery stories. I loved that they were both Aurors, but Draco was working for the French ministry. Cormac was so hilarious. That rule of the Ministry is really so ridiculous, as was his reasonings for the attack. I really loved that you had him quivering while Harry fingered the button that could end his life after Cormac's description of what he did to Lucius and Narcissa. Arg! This story is so lovely. I wish I had more words for how much I adored this. Draco and Harry's banter was lovely, as was their one time together, and the emotions of everything after that. This was really well-written. You are brilliant and this was a joy to read.
schedule August 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Tiger Heart: I can't end here!! *balling out crying*
Slythindor: Why Not??
Tiger Heart: Because it just can't! It's too damn good of a story... Give it back! -_-,
Gryfferin: ... *sniffs and tries to say something*... waaaaaah!!
person Storm
schedule July 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Great Job! I enjoyed this story from start to finish and I can't wait to read more of your work. Keep up the good work.
person FallenAngel1129
schedule July 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Aww....thats it? no lovin? how sad....its so depressing when a good story comes to an end...but alas...life doesnt last forever
person Lumcer
schedule July 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Great Story!! I absolutely loved it! It was quite different from anything else I've read so far.
Really well done. Please let me know if you decide to write anything else or if you already have.

KCK-Lumcer
person Jilliane
schedule July 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
(Epilogue)

"You're very selective with your slot, then."

*snert!*

Aww, the perfect ending! LOL!

Seriously, I'm sure Harry will rejoice in Draco's good days, and be his rock during the bad ones. This was a great story. I loved this ending, that Harry took it upon himself to just go after what he wanted with out a big scene or a load of histrionics, to just be there. Perfect. I've enjoyed this story so much, and there was so much to enjoy, from the original plot to the great humour to the outstanding writing. Although I'm a bit sad this is the last chapter, I do adore a happy ending, so if it must be the end, this is a good one. I look forward with much anticipation to see what treat you'll have next. Thanks so much for a perfectly delightful read!
person avihenda
schedule July 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
sweet end :-)
I liked the story. Thanks for sharing it with us!
schedule July 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Sooo need chapter 16!!!
schedule July 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
hunh. that was kind of an open ended epilogue. does this mean sequel?
person Squirrel
schedule July 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
WOW!!!!! Your story was amazing. I hope you write more like this. It was well thought out.