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for His Best Mistake

by LadyVoldemort87

person Anon
schedule September 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Goshdarnit woman, I nearly choked on my cuppa when I read about Hermione falling on the step. I had visions of a first rate disaster and I was already thinking 'no- don't take their baby'. And thank Merlin you didn't. Whew!! Although why it took something like this to get Draco to admit he loved her!!!!!! Men !! *rolls eyes* And awww they're having a girl. :) When you were describing Hermione being all out in front I was thinking, yep, another Malfoy male. So much for that old wives tale, eh? LOL Very sweet! And I'm glad you're writing again, RL can be quite the pain at times.
schedule September 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Awwwww.....poor mione....poor draco....dickhead harry.....I heart you my darling girl!!! Great job, did it help you get your mad out?


Ok...toddling off now to finish talking to you actually......


XXXXX
SG
person kazfeist
schedule September 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I'm so very glad the baby was fine. It's a heartbreaking thing to endure something happening to one's child. Whether born or unborn. Can't wait for the rest of the story. :D
schedule September 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Lady V....

Thank you for updating one of my favorite stories!!! A bit of tension filled chapter we have here. I am sooo glad that hermione and their daughter are ok!!! Harry can be such a jerk......good thing Pansy and Ron were there to lead him away. Awwww, they are gonna get married!!! I love happy endings!!

Brilliant job, sweetie!!

Love
LadyB
xoxoxoxo
schedule September 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
oooh ur back!!! i was missing this story sooo sooo much!!
great job!! and they getting married!!! ahhh awesome!!
schedule September 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
wow that was awsome .. please please please update soon ... later for now

angel
schedule September 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Please, please continue this story! I love it!
schedule August 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I'm totally loving this story so far and I'm hoping you update real soon!
~SS
person ichiruki
schedule July 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
a submit a squeak of "oh no! that's not going to go very well!" lol Falling down stairs with loads of suspense about what happens next and who feels what never implies good things are about to happen ;)....I'm was hearing the "dun dun dun" music as I read your teaser!
person bobbie
schedule July 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i really like this story, i hope you continue with it, please post more soon..