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for Elurot Det Alsmai

by portercm

person freelancer360
schedule June 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I knew it! I just knew that it was Mr. Tisdale (Or whatever his name was)! Yay go me!

That aside, this story is excellent. Very dark in some points and then you just pick us back up and dust us off and set us all happy again. Great job! You did a wonderful job displaying their personalities, I just loved Draco in this. And the sex scene, seriously, was the hottest thing I've read in a long time!

Great work!
schedule June 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Sooo loved this!
person Milva
schedule June 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I think you must improve you plot, but it's fine ^^ I very quickly guess that Mr Tisdale is this mysterious man and that Elurot Det Alsami means "I am slated to rule". And I guess it's first HP based story I've seen word "Tesco" xD lmao!
schedule June 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i loved it!
person RDWind
schedule June 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
What a great start to the story!
schedule June 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Nice story, much better than what I thought it was going to be at first. I hope that you do a continuation on this story. Very intriguing I must stay.