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for Broomsticks and Bedfellows

by TempestLore

schedule June 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
oooo i like the whole ginny becoming draco....one could do many things with that lol. Great chapter looking forwards to the next one.
schedule June 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
well, it's getting more exciting! And i like that you didn't put the plot too long coz i guess it would be too boring if you didn't cut some tension between four of them short. I wanna see the action now!
schedule June 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Gosh I hope you don't write anymore Ginny and Draco scenes like that because I hate her enough but I love the story otherwise so please update!
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schedule June 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
honestly, while i'm an avid fan of the series,i feel as if Hr was just far too leniant. while i'm 0 tolerance with cheatign i understand that there are people that are a bit more accepting of it and willign to move past it, but in this situation it just felt a bit... idk, not so much unreal, but weak on her part. it's one thing to love a man entirely, but an entirely different one to accept betrayl from him so easily (esp. with your best friend, a factor that should make his actions all the more disgusting--and ginny better be punished, i'd assume that harry would deserve to knwo thought!!!!!!!!!!). it's just that this is hermione, a char that has always staked a lot on loyalty to her loved ones, and expected it in return, and the fact that she can let such a betrayl go so easily isnt just OOC but, in my opinion, unhealthy for their relationship as she never had the chance to vent, draco only alotted HIMSELF one
schedule June 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ginny that B!tch! great chapter, hope me reviewing after each chapter isnt annoying =\
schedule June 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
great chapter!! ^_^ I love the new start between Draco and hermione. Cant wait for the next one
schedule June 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
oooh.. wow.. this 3rd part is getting better and better with each chapter!
Keep up the Wonderful work!!
schedule June 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
omfg no freaking way, that was awesome you have to update soon!!! -anxious-
schedule June 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
great 3rd chapter =] Is there more to the whole Harry being in the well thing, it seemed rather odd and a bit suspicious. Looking forward to the next chapter ^_^
schedule June 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Finally! the next Broomstick series :)

well, this is kind of unpredictable for me lol (and of course for Draco, Hermione, Harry, Blaise, Fitz and many more too!) I admit that this is a bit unexpected for me to read the #3 of this series and found it came with the disturbing plot! luckily, i'm a bit sleepy so i might missed some words or feeling of characters but i could feel it's really gonna be interesting and scarier than #2

i have to say that i don't like the idea of Hermione been so stupid to enter some unknown evil's house even with Harry Potter (since that Bahtist family has a very long history and they should have more experiences with killing people as she had read!) but yeah, who knew they made such a mistake, right? it's reflection of human nature and especially for Hermione's personality. So i can't blame the author but i should compliment her to bring this point into the plot once again.

Even though i hate angst, i hope this one doesn't disappoint me! Bring back some fluffy and don't let Hermione or Blaise dying! plz!! Anyway i'm impressed with the plot.

How long this one going to be? Can't wait to see how they bring them back after been retrieved minds?