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for Broomsticks and Bedfellows

by TempestLore

person Samantha
schedule July 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
fabulous chapter. simply wonderful. I love angst and this was great. but i do think that the makeup, while great sex, was a bit rushed and soon. she didn't have time to be mad. it may be, though that this is part of hte story, i'm not up to the rest yet, i just had to review because it's great. I read the previous story (stories?) and am so excited youve turned them into a saga.

great job. you're a great writer.
schedule July 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hi! this part of the story was great!!! wonderfull job!!
schedule July 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
great ending i'm looking forward to broomsticks and the big apple ^_^
person Katt1187
schedule July 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
That was so amazing. I am so excited to read the next one :)
schedule July 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
finally! i really like this story even if it's too scary sometimes :P can't wait to read about Malfoys in NY! hope they won't be full-time CSI this time :P

waiting for Merlin's Coven too!
schedule July 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I think he saved Draco because he wasnt exactly a loving father, meaning he didn't show him all the love he should have. Great chapter btw
person Tenar10r
schedule July 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Loved it!
schedule July 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
oh i loved it!
schedule July 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
oh i loved it!
schedule July 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
well, that muggle torture cave is disgusting, really! so what we have read in the last 2 chapter weren't real? haha, playing trick in Draco's mind. i thought it's because Draco had a flaw about guilty over his act with Ginny for Hermione? i'm not sure if it's right :P but i thought it had something to do with Hermione that made Nathenial(did i type it right?) control in his mind when he's already enter the house.