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for Life From the Start

by xxxsuushiixxx

person HarryVik
schedule July 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
That's kind of odd. Why would he give the responsibility of a baby to a student, that's obviously going his last year at school. shouldn't the headmaster give it to someone who do not have to study for his NEWT:s It would have been understanding if he had given harry to Poopy or at least an adult to take care of him why Draco of all people?

person HarryVik
schedule July 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I can't help but feel slightly ill when I read de-ageing fanfiction. Don't take me wrong I love how angst it sometimes can become when in some cases people learns how the de-aged person childhood was. thought I can't really like it when the parenting person falls head over heels with the "child" and when the "child" is back to normal the slash start. Don't misunderstand I love slash more than this family, brother talk that the persons involved sometimes feel towards the "child". It's just that when the care for the "child" they see it as their own child. But when the "child" is back to normal, for me at least it would feel like I'm having the hots over my baby brother/sister.

That's what's always buggering me, how come the people in the stories can so easily change from one perspective (baby brother/sister) to an entirely other (hot lover). I can't help but ask don't they feel somewhat ill think of them self like that.

OK I know this is just a fiction, but I can't help but start question things. Maybe you find this babbling making some sense, maybe it will help you create future character or it will be a totally wast of our alls time.

Good day.
person Milva
schedule July 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
When'll be new chapter? Miss this story so much :(
person alientheet
schedule July 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
loving this story... original idea. please update soon!
person SP777
schedule July 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
about #15...

*growls* Dammit all to hell and back, you made me do something that I just can't
stand doing...you made me ALMOST squeal like a damn fangirl with the fluffiness!!!

Can't stand you right now. *goes off to sulk*
person Dezra
schedule July 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
GO Harry Go....I hope that Draco is smart enough to listen.
schedule July 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I don't want to wait a while for the next update... I want it now. That last chapter was awesome. I really can't wait, I'm on pins and needles. I love this story...please update as soon as you can.
schedule July 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
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~Briar~
schedule July 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
oh my god! this chapter was so touching i cried throughout the entire thing. poor draco. that feeling of knowing youre going to be left behind by someone you love is never easy and always painful. but i absolutely love your story and i look forward to the next chapter.
schedule July 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
so cute can't wait for the next chapter