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July 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
That is great so far! The story itself is a good one, but you really need to give some thought as to getting a beta reader to go over it. There were some mistakes that could be easily fixed. Good luck and keep updating!
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July 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OMG this is good i absolutely love what you have going on here.... i love that draco and hermione spposedly hate each other but have some underlying sexual tension nice
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July 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I LOVE THIS STORY very original..... i hope you continue it... i love draco and hermione in this i know some people will complain bc they are not completely in character but who cares.... please update soon oh and whats with this new guy hmmm and he was glaring at draco something is going on with him i have a funny feeling that he is going to play a part in this story
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July 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
aaahhhh what a great story... i love it ok so merlin huh i bet that is waht they will name their baby... this is going to be a great story i hope you update soon and i hope you stay here with your stories but if you move to ff.net just let us know i do not go to that site regularly but for your stories i will use your link on your authors page to get there.... i have a lot of thought on this chap like harrys involvement and what the heck is voldie doing??? i love how protective draco is of hermione...... anyway update soon please....
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June 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I can't wait for the next chapter! So, was Harry only one step to defeating Voldemort? Like, was he only buying the coven time to grow up? That's what I think. Oh, how will he react when Hermione and Draco get married??
YAY!!! I love this story!
YAY!!! I love this story!
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June 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This is AMAZING. Please update as soon as possible I can't wait for more!
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June 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
love it!!!
hope you continue
hope you continue
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June 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I like this one even better then ur other stories and ive read them all
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June 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
More please!!!!!! I'm glad that you have Ron being more mature than most stories portray him...I can't wait for the wedding...and the baby!!!!
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June 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Excenllet! keep going, i like yr plot. =D