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Happy End Yeahness!!!! Tehe
but it was so sudden. humph.
but at the same time so incredibly hot and brilliant . oh well, terrific story!!!

Soooo need the sequel!!!

SQUEE!! *megawat smile* Finally!! *wriggles in chair* Draco finally fessed up! KAWAII!! lol, Shame it took Harry being kidnapped by a psycopathic-would-be-boyfriend interlopper for him to finally abbandon his comfy house on the shores of De-Nile. *nods* But it all worked out in the end. This was a brilliant and HOTT fic from start to finnish. *two thumbs up*

i loved this story
all of your stories so far have been great reads.
some of the stuff in thbis story reminded me of a movie, and i think you would be perfect to write it switching the caracters with harry and draco
any way the movie is called
"Maid of Honor" with patrick dempsey
if you have not seen your missing out on a great one my friend and i laughed almost thru the hole thing.
keep up the excelent stories
M~

This is one of the best things i've read in ages. Absolutely fantastic. I'll confess I fell for the herring of Sara being a stalker, but only until Brandon showed up. It was extremely well done though, the only reason i figured it out was thanks to my instincts. Which havent led me wrong yet i'm glad to say.

I just came across this story tonight and read the whole damn thing. Loved it! The sex scenes were effing HOT! At one point I realized that I was actually sitting with my face about an inch away from the screen! Draco was so sweet and emotional when he wasn't being a prat. =) I'd love to hear the reasons behind his nasty behavior. Sequel perhaps? I'm off to check out some of your other stories.

(Chapter 7)

Aww! I do adore a happy ending! Yay!

This was a very enjoyable read from beginning to end, with some good humourous bits, a nice plotline, and of course, the concept of "companionable magic", which was a nice touch of originality. You've got a sequel outlined you say? Well, what are you waiting for?? Get to writing it! Pronto! Your readers demand it! :D

Thanks for the great read!

oh i loved a sequel!

really great, I hope you do do a sequel!! Loved it!

I just read this whole thing and I gotta say, it was great, really well written and everything. I even liked your oc (I usually hate oc's as a rule). It was all very entertaining right up until the end. When it was over, I was left somewhat unsatisfied.

I'm always slightly annoyed when Draco completely gets away with being a total ass. I mean he kept acting like a jerk right up until the bitter end and then there was no apology, not even so much as an explanation. Yeah ok so they're like soul-mates or whatever but that shouldn't equal an automatic pardon for treating someone like shit.

Some might argue that helping to save him is reasonable grounds to forgive Draco for everything else, but I just find that Harry shows an indecent lack of self-respect in this story. I can't help feeling a little disturbed when I read things that romanticize that sort of thing. As far as I'm concerned "but I love him" isn't a good enough reason to spontaneously excuse someone who hurts you. I would have at least demanded an explanation. Maybe I just would have liked to get inside Draco's head a little bit. The reader had ample opportunity to sympathize with Harry but Draco's feelings and motivations remained a mystery.

Of course I realize that this is only a personal opinion (yet another of my pointless moral debates) and you certainly have a right to write it however you like. I could never bully you into changing your content and I have no complaint whatsoever about any technical aspects. Your writing is really good and I did like this story a lot overall. Regardless of any possible small insult to my overblown sense of justice, you've done an amazing job and I hope to see more from you.