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June 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
(Chapter 2)
Nice! I love your long and satisfying chapters! I like it that Draco has made a re-appearance, although I thought he may. And was that hot! Very nicely written! All that crackling and whatnot Harry felt....intriguing. I have my suspicions, but I won't speculate. And poor Harry.....will he ever escape the teeth-grindingly annoying Hermione? He should just tell her to sod off! LOL.
Nice job, and I'm looking forward to the next chapter. Something tells me that look in Draco's eye will ultimately bode well for Harry. I like jealous Draco!
Nice! I love your long and satisfying chapters! I like it that Draco has made a re-appearance, although I thought he may. And was that hot! Very nicely written! All that crackling and whatnot Harry felt....intriguing. I have my suspicions, but I won't speculate. And poor Harry.....will he ever escape the teeth-grindingly annoying Hermione? He should just tell her to sod off! LOL.
Nice job, and I'm looking forward to the next chapter. Something tells me that look in Draco's eye will ultimately bode well for Harry. I like jealous Draco!
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June 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Interesting and intriguing story! I can't wait to find out what all that electrifying and crackling thingy going on with them everything they have a sexual encounter was! Love the fact that Draco was showing some jealousy even if he tries to hide or deny it ^_^
Please update chapter 3 and let us know what Hermione is going to do to Harry ^_~
Jan
Please update chapter 3 and let us know what Hermione is going to do to Harry ^_~
Jan
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June 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i loved it! and so need more please!
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June 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I like it so far. it has potential. there are bits that I*m not getting, but I'm confident you'll explane it in the next chapters :-)
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June 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This is really goooooooooood. I felt as nervous as Harry, and then hart broken as he. Please update soon.
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June 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
THAT was definitely no normal one-night stand! Not at all! and Draco seems like he wants Harry more than anything else, but tries to be happy with the one-night stand he got to save himself some pain if Harry doesn't agree to become more than just a one-off.
So, yeah, I'll wait for the next chapter.
Oh and... you once wrote that Sara (it was her name, right?) has blue eyes and then you wrote she has green!
So, yeah, I'll wait for the next chapter.
Oh and... you once wrote that Sara (it was her name, right?) has blue eyes and then you wrote she has green!
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June 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Awww. I saw that coming a mile away. >.> no pun nintended. Of course Harry would want to get closer. But seriously...Draco has a motive for sleeping with Harry I just know it! This fic is wonderful and Im happy to see it multichaptered as I am caving more!! Cant wait for an update!
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June 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I like it. Hope you can get the next chapter up soon. ^_^
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June 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hm, may be it was a bet with his friends that Draco had to fulfill? But then he started feeling more than he though he would, about it? I sure hope you update soon!
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June 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Nice beginning. Poor Harry! Too soft-hearted for his own good. Should have stuck to his original "I'm not interested...".
I like it! I'm wondering...will it all be from Harry's POV, or will some be from Draco's? Awaiting the next chapter....update soon, please!