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for A Friend for Life.

by Vampirezdarkgurl

schedule June 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
That was cute, i really like it!!

Can't wait to read the sequel

More please!!
schedule June 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I love this story cant wait for the sequal
person abi
schedule June 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
pokes where is the Sequel!!! Waaaa XD

i loved this so much! please let me know if you can when the sequel is out xoxo
person StarlingsWings
schedule June 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Please don't take this down! It may not be how you envisioned it, but it still looks really interesting. In fact, I've really enjoyed the story so far. Wyatt orbing away with Harry even startled *me*. I like how Wyatt recognized that something was wrong immediately, but it took a second for Harry to start crying. I don't know if that's supposed to be an age thing or a magic thing but for a moment I thought that it was only going to effect Wyatt. You did a good job on the parental worry as well. It's generally a hit or miss thing and most miss.
person luciansalesia
schedule June 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
it was quite cute, I liked it^^
person Blushing
schedule June 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
love it upload the sequel soon!
person rainbow
schedule June 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I love your story.I cann't wait to see where this story goes.
person kallipso
schedule June 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
MORE MORE MORE MORE
Well now every one knows why he was saying MINE!
schedule June 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
AWSOME!! I can't wait to read the sequal!! Please hurry and post the next chapter!!!
person merrymowmow
schedule June 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Is the sequel going to be a one-shot.
I like the idea of it.