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June 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
interesting, cool so far hehe i
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June 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I really enjoyed the opening chapter. The conversation between Ron, Harry and Hermione was interesting and it scene very well.
I also like how you also just got on with the story. You didn't drag it out. It was like, "this is who Harry is, the life he has lead [for the story], now ONWARDS".
I hope Draco Malfoy makes an appearance. :-)
I also like how you also just got on with the story. You didn't drag it out. It was like, "this is who Harry is, the life he has lead [for the story], now ONWARDS".
I hope Draco Malfoy makes an appearance. :-)
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June 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
aww! no magic! oh well. good so far though i hope the next chapter is longer.
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June 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I can't wait to read more of this!