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schedule July 18, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Wow, this was...

This was just...


WOW -. brilliant, intense, awsome - I love harry and draco in this - WOW, really!
schedule August 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
That was surprisingly lovely. I kept expecting something shallow or disgusting I suppose, some little quirk I would like becuase that is what results from obsession, or in Draco's case actual shallowness/vanity. And it was, as Draco stared in the mirrors, and I became a bit bug-eyed when I realized the extreme you took this. And yet, this turned out lovely. His shallowness wasn't unfounded, wasn't disgusting. I hope this makes sense, but I like where everything ended up. If you were to continue this, I can see a million ways it could go wrong from Draco's "friends" describing this as not liking Harry, but just wanting attention, to outraged squeals of protest from Harry's fanbase, but still, I like ths conclusion. This was a wonderful peice.
schedule June 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I sooo loved this!!!
person Trish
schedule June 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I love love love this story! Your a brillaint writer!
person Freedert
schedule June 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Even though there wasn't any smut, I really really liked it. Well written. Bravo! You have my compliments, you are amazing.

~Dracos Pet
person Roozette
schedule June 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hot damn, I loved this! I loved your broken and vulnerable Draco (there is something just *so* appealing about that, you know?) and how Harry was confident and knew more than other people presumed. I thought your Ron and Hermione were brilliantly in character... I could ramble on. In a nutshell, I think you are brilliant and this was amazing. Although it was a one shot, I seriously hope you consider a part two because I would LOVE to see peoples reactions to this.

Kisses and Love!
Roo
person MoonTart
schedule June 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This is excellent. You're such a talented writer it is always a treat to read your stuff.
person Mangacat
schedule June 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Eheheee.. nice little feat!! I like it quite a bit, because of the exeptionally typical behaviour Harry shows.. it's so logical it hurts *g* I hope they'll be happy!!! And screw the uproar!
Cat
schedule June 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
It is funny really, I started reading this - not paying attention to author's name. By the time I was at the end, I was thinking to myself,"good, God, this is so good, surly this can't be a new writer" then I looked at the bottom at who wrote it. Of course, it was good, all yours are. Thanks for this one, great look into Draco's feelings and Harry's response to them. I also liked not having the cloak and map, that does get tired and overused so much. Draco's housemates were very well done too, very 3-d and believable.
schedule June 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i like it!