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September 1, 2009 at 12:00 AM
...I have the sinking suspicion that the lovely encounter just encountered by our dear Head Girl was nothing more than an over-heated dream. For heaven's gate, quite teasing us with this nonsense. Dream sequences irritate the audience- no matter how good they are. I do find the idea that she will have to give in to him to be most intriguing and I do hope you update this rather sooner than I've managed to update my own works of progress. And I do love the idea of McGonagall drugging her Ginger Newts to calm her students. Clever that. And a good premise, indeed. Keep it up.
~CC
~CC
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September 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story so far. Can't wait to you add more.
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June 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This is insanely fabulous and YOU are on my "must watch out for" list because I'm VERY sure you'll be producing gold for quite a while. I'm so hooked it's like an addiction. Seriously. And yes, insert cliche of choice but I simply can't wait for the next chapter. You've probably got hundreds of these reviews already but I can't help but gush. That's all I'm really good for unless I'm feeling vindictive. Keep it up and you will have no problem with popularity on this site.
I love the timing and pacing and Hermione. She's still irrational like she ought to be (honestly, at 17 no one is quite a "Yoda" if you know what I mean) but she just as quickly turns around and proves who brilliant she is. I'm simply in love.
I love the timing and pacing and Hermione. She's still irrational like she ought to be (honestly, at 17 no one is quite a "Yoda" if you know what I mean) but she just as quickly turns around and proves who brilliant she is. I'm simply in love.
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June 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh shit, did she fall asleep again?! *sigh* I did that alot in school, all you have do is this. 1)DO NOT lift your head up in attempt to make it look like you wern't sleeping. 2)Dont act cool useing lines like "I was checking for pin holes in my eyelids. Instead say Amen so the teacher can hear you, lift up your head, and ask them if the needed anything. Now if you snore.....your busted, sorry.
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June 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I really love it, but it was a bit short. you write very well. It's a shame to have such a short chappy. So far nice characterizations.
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June 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story very much! I can't wait to read more, well done.
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June 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Whoa, evil Snape at his snarkiest! I'm looking forward to see if he follows through with his threat about their marks for the class. Very nicely started with just a hint of UST!
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June 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Please update soon!
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June 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Can't wait to see where this going! Love that snarky Snape! Don't change him! Update soon! Happy writing! Tengo que irme! Salud! Killer K
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June 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Well then, i guess i'm the first reviewer here so far. Yay! I like this story. It has very good potential and can't wait to see the next chapter. Keep it coming.
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