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for Fate\'s Victim

by X5927alpha

person t
schedule June 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I like. Especially if it's bottom draco which is becoming more impossible to find.
person Ayamekoi
schedule June 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This fic nice, short chapters but nice. Ic an't wait for the next chapter
person m!
schedule June 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I like it. In fact I love it.

Dombledore always seemed a little using and controlling.

Please update soon.... I am more then curious to what draco and harry will do.
person helewisetran
schedule June 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
just read your fanfic today. The idea is so new it captivate me completely. I bet u r the first one think of in vitro fertilization for a HP fanfiction.
person heyyou
schedule June 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh hell yeah! Finally, a new story worth reading. Please continue!
person sp
schedule June 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Great story. Continue soon, please.
schedule June 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i loved it!
schedule June 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
So he DID ask him to have his babies... well, Harry's in any case. I was right. *laughs in amusement*

I just don't get how the heck Dumbledore's mind works, though. I mean, yes, Harry finds himself in danger every term, and yes, that IS a bad thing since the Wizarding world needs what he has to give, but that is for Harry to defeat Voldemort, and that's something the prophecy said that only *Harry* would be able to do, not his child... or is there another prophecy about Harry's child defeating Voldemort if Harry dies or can't? Or is it that, without Harry, a child of Harry would have inherited grandma Lily's protection by blood and thus would also be an equal (like Harry) to Voldemort?

Anyway, that aside Dumbledore sure is disgusting in this story. I hope Snape has something to say about this!
person RRW
schedule June 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This is really interesting...can't wait to see Harry's reaction to Dumbledore's manipulations.
schedule June 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i like it. what did he just do??