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Chapter 2??? Please?

I thought this was very hot, and pretty good, although Harry's casual acceptance is rather strange. I also think you could do with proof reading it or getting a beta, there's quite a few mistakes, although they're not too obvious. The most obvious ones were in the summary- you really need to correct your summary, the constant mistakes nearly put me off reading it, which would have been a shame. Good story, I hope you continue to write this pairing, it's rather sexy.

I'd like to see more of THIS story. I want to see how Sirius and Remus negotiate 'sharing' Harry, or rather how Sirius, Remus, AND Moony negotiate it. I also want to see Remus's reactions to Ginny. Harry may be the submissive, but I can't see him staying submissive all the time. What would happen if Remus pushed too much and Harry started pushing back? Who would Sirius side with? How would Harry deal if his two mates ganged up on him and how would Remus react if Sirius sided with Harry against the alpha?

YUMMY!! I do hope there will be more!!

.This is a great story! I love Alfa Remy. Will there be more, I would love to read about Harry, Sirius, and Remus. Also the jelousy that comes with being territorial can happen any where even at the way to the grocery store. :)

Well that was tasty. Hope you do more stories and hopefully next time we can see Sirius getting his chance at Harry.

omg
so good
i loved it!