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for The Goodwill Games

by Juwel

schedule June 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
ROFLMFAO!! molly as the new DADA teacher! i have never seen that one to date and its really interesting. update soon.
person EbonWings
schedule June 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I really hope this isn't the end. It seem a bit... unfinished? An I'd really like to see you develop this fully if this is all you've got. It really is over all a good story.
schedule June 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i don't get it...in the summary it says it's complete...but it seems very far from complete...so since there's note about being it in 5 parts, i expect it to be 5 chapters...anyhow, i hope this isn't the end of it...seems like a start of a really interesting story...and i'd really like to read more about this shy and lost draco ^^


Adrienne
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schedule June 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
wow, what a wonderful - and highly unorthodox - idea! it's not going to be easy, under the circumstances, but at least harry and draco will definately get some bonding time (lol). and snape being a portrait is just priceless. he must be the only headmaster of hogwarts to get sacked (sort of) within just one year! i wonder what team neville's in... i mean, he, luna and ginny were kinda the leaders at school last year too...

draco's being very... odd. i mean, he's traumatized and all, but he's not the type to stay quiet, u know? i wonder what kind of explanation harry'll find for his behaviour. i guess it's good that they're not being overtly hostile, but it's still weird. and lucius's sentence was unbelievable! i mean, there's way too much proof of him being a deatheater, i can't imagine the wizarding world treating him so lightly. the deaths and other casualties they suffered are still so fresh, how can they possibly be in such a forgiving mood? even if the malfoys claim they acted against the dark lord near the end, it was only draco and narcissa who actually did something (sort of).

anyways, don't mind me, i'm just poking holes at things that are really of no consequence. i like this story a lot and can't wait to read more!
schedule June 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
oh how lucky! i love it!